AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/10/07
!!! my long review got deleted. here's my short version.
i'm "starcrossed.emma" on ff.net (on it for my cousin, i'm sinead, not emma). i don't have an account here, but i was (woo!) your first reviewer for this story. and i couldn't favorite it. :/
but i loved this story. and i just recently re-found it, and i was so excited. but there weren't any updates... so if you haven't promised this to somebody, can i finish it? or, if you have, can you send me the url so i can read their version? or, if you haven't but you don't want anybody to finish it, can i steal your idea?
anyway, it's a wonderful story...
love,
sinead (pronounced shinay, haha) |
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wow this story is amazing please dont give up on it, it'd be such aa waste wwhen u hav sumthing so good and are such a talented writer   |
Author Feedback: yeah...i mean i coined the john tucker idea and now i'm not following through. a lot of lily/james authors are going to be angry b/c they know they could finish the story. but i can't...i'm sorry |
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omg this fic is great i cant w8 2 c wat happens next
plz update asap
my only q is if ur gonna make it super identical to the movie or is it only similar...
anywayz kudos its amazing
plz dont giv up on it ur 2 good of a writer |
Author Feedback: haha thanks but i don't think there's any future between me and fanfiction anymore |
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You should have had Sirius as John Tucker and James as the other Tucker. |
Author Feedback: yeah but then lily'd have to fall in love with SIRIUS and...well...i don't want that to happen. i'll just leave it this way. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/07
I really like this story! I haven't seen the movie yet but I am tomorrow.Please update  |
Author Feedback: hah i got on fanfic for the first time in like a year...i really don't have time anymore |
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No! not JUST like the movie. I'm reading this fanfic for what happens after!!! alright this tory rocks ur world
kises
Marie |
Author Feedback: thank you! i'm making a lily/james ending |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/07
please update again! i haven't seen the movie yet, but i'm going to go out tonight and rent it. i swear. i'm really excited for itt... 
xoxo tessa |
Author Feedback: hehe...it's really good. i liked it. best chick flick ever next to mean girls.  |
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Okay i must say that i LUV this movie!!!!!! n i think that since it is AU that the ending of this sould also b AU!! James n Lily forever!!!!!  great chappter
~jess |
Author Feedback: you mean the ending SHOULDN'T be AU? because that's what would get James/Lily together. |
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kTUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/07
Haha. It's all good. I guess I'm one of those people who would take it either way. Besides, this is Portkey...but if you wanted, i would totally love it if you wrote an AU ending for a differnt sight?
anyways, i do love Lily/James, so I'm still looking forward to reading this!! I can't wait! |
Author Feedback: i don't know what other site...i'll think about that. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/07
No no no, I loved the ending of JTMD for the movie, if you're going to make it a story and on a James/Lily site no less, I think you need to have James get nice at the end and have them together. |
Author Feedback: you're confusing me. you say you loved the JTMD ending and you want James to get nice at the end which means...you like BOTH?
Well, i've already got a winner....i'm making james and lily get together at the end |
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Nooooo! Please don't! Then Lily and Remus will get together! THAT SUCKS! I really really like the story so far! I'm sorry but that would COMPLETELY ruin it! Follow both of them, the book and the movie. Just leave out James's brother! I really hated it in the movie when the girl ended up with the brother! The movie would have been soooo much better if she stayed with John Tucker. But your story seems to have a lot of potential, and you're a great writer. I mean, do what you want, but you'll probably have a lor more fans of your story if you have James and Lily end up together in the end. I mean, it is a James and Lily fic. |
Author Feedback: yeah so far the l/j ending lovers are winning 4 to 3
YEAH! in the movie i wish she stayed with John but when John went back to his cheating ways...that turned me off.
i love how you took the time to write a review. anyway i'll be going with an L/J ending so don't worry. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/07
u know that in the movie the girl falls in love with johns brother? and the girl and john dont end up together so it should be like jonathan potter must die and have james play the brother unless you are changing the plot line |
Author Feedback: oh, did you read my A/N?
Well i mentioned that Remus Lupin would act as John's brother. but in my author's note i also asked you guys if you wanted an ending following the movie or a Lily/James ending. Lily/James is winning so i'm sorry. portkey my delete my story otherwise |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/07
great story i love the movie too and u gotta make James and Lily stay together it wouldn't be a good story without it ending with the two of them update soon can't wait to read more |
Author Feedback: three votes for a non-AU, L/J ending. i like that idea better.
don't worry, i'll probably update tomorrow |
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kTUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/07
I think you should go with the movie. But it's a really good idea! I loved JTMD! I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out! (Well, I can sorta imagine because of the movie, but you might change it up or something. Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing if/when you change things or not.)
It's a really good one! |
Author Feedback: thankssss
first vote for an AU ending. most people want it L/J so i think i'll do that because someone said my story might get removed if i don't...  sorry |
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KelseyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/07
I think you should have Lily and James end up together. If not...I think they will have the story removed. I read something about it when I was submitting my fics...But I'm loving this, so keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: okay another vote for a non-AU ending. i'll probably do that because i like L/J |
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