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Phoenix
Unsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 01/12/06
Hey
I just found this story and let me tell you.. it's so good that I read it in 2 days! I just wanted to tell you I absolutely love this fic before I go to sleep
If you are still looking for a beta I can give you a hand if you want
Please continue with the story
 

malu
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 10/11/06
how sad and romantic and sweet and... T_T. I 've been away from this fandom for a while and i just got back to read my fave fics and I just absolutely love this one. I know this chapter is a bit old (okay its been ages), but I really wanted to congratulate you on this fic, I really enjoy it.
All the past life stuff really makes it more interesting and I really love it that they even fight about their other relationships in the past lives. Keep it up!
Author Feedback: Hi,

I know. You are right. It’s been ages....
Bad, bad LittleWitch.
I’m glad you liked the “past life” stuff. Sometimes I’m afraid this plot has become more AU than I have first planned...and the funny thing is that this whole past twist began as a way to keep the story close to the canon...How crazy can I be, huh?

LW
 

ShadowFox
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 30/10/06
C'mon Girl. I am waiting . I know you are pretty easy and this is prolly not even on your first page to do list but I am still waiting
Author Feedback: Hi ShadowFox,

Yep, I’m still alive. I’m still writing although not as much as I or you guys would like. Real life has been very time consuming, which is great really, lot of good things going on... But that leaves little space for my “writing escapes”. Also, I accidentaly erased from my computer an entire scene between Harry and Ron that, in my opinion, among the many dialogues you will find in my next chapter, was essencial to the story...So it took me a while to write it all back and the whole re-writing process was a nightmare because the more I tried to make it similar to the old version, the more it became different. Fortunaly, the next chapter is finally finished, at least the writing process is. Now I just need to find a beta and as soon as the beta phase is completed, the chapter will be posted. Hopefully, before Christmas...

LW
 

mania
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 04/10/06
i really really love this story! it's really great!! but when it's go on? i must know, how it's go on!
bye
Author Feedback: Mania,

Thank you. I’m glad you liked it. Hopefully, the next chapter will be posted before Christmas. It all depends on finding a beta...

LW
 

ShadowFox
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 03/10/06
how has it been going? Hope you are doing alright and hopefully still writing . Still waiting for the next chapter.
 

MinisterforMadness
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 05/09/06
There are quite a few confusing sentences in chapter 18 actually, I’m not sure if it was intended or not… I think it was mainly grammar. Anyway, I am not hear to criticise! I loved the story… it kept me hooked… I was meant to be getting ready for school tomorrow but I just had to read the end. When they kept going through the memories, I just couldn’t stop crying. You’re right, at first it was confusing… but I liked that… it kept me wanting to read, and when the puzzle was lifted toward the end, I finally understood. I thought towards the end of chapter 19 until the end I would cry my whole life’s worth of tears actually.

I swear the status was complete but - ah - it's not. I just want them to rewrite fate, destiny, whatever it is, and just be together. Please? I can't cry anymore... I just want them to be happy *sniff*

I'm sure wherever you take this story it will be great. And I'm sure you'll also make them live "happily ever after" *glares - you will*...

I'm joking. I cannot wait for the next installment!
Author Feedback: Hi,

First, I’m sorry for the time it took me to reply...

Then, there are a couple of chapters that have not been beta-ed...Chapter 18 might be one of them. I’m not sure, I’ll check it later...but yes, I’m aware that my english is not that good...actually sometimes I wonder how I got this far with this story... it’s not really easy for me to write in English and that’s one of the many reasons why it takes me so long to update.

About Dumbledore. I guess what you have to consider here is that my Dumbledore is just a shadow of the Dumbledore you know from the real HP universe. I guess you guys will only see what I mean, in the chapters that I plan to, at least, begin to write tonight and mostly in the final scene of this fic that will involve some Guardians...

Thanks for all the kind words and all the tears you shed. It’s always good to know that something you have written have touched people in such a way.

LW
 

MinisterforMadness
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/09/06
So much more to go and such a brilliant story but I need to get this out of my system - I HATE DUMBLEDORE IN THIS STORY! It's weird that you have portrayed a whole new side to him, and it seems so possible and impossible at the same time..

I am hooked to this story, I will admit. Love it. But if they don't end up together, if Dumbledore isn't really dead in the story... I want you to write me in there so I can kill him myself... please?
 

tiduarte
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 22/07/06
What was all that about Ron? Why would Hermione be afraid to tell Harry?
The son was a shock for me and at the same time so sad. This chapter was so full of emotion... I can't even try to describe what it made me feel...

I always end up with the feeling that I'm repeating myself in every review I write here.
But what can I do? I can’t help it. You're just amazing!

Ok, I think I embarrassed myself enough...
Thanks for the wonderful chapter!

Author Feedback: Hi tiduarte,

I guess I also own you a big apologize. I’m really sorry. Four months, huh? Bad, bad LittleWitch. No more doughnuts for me...

Anyway, thank you so very much for your kind words. Your questions about Ron will have to wait a little longer to be answered. In my next chapter ( the one that I have just finished written) there will be hints, but the true story of what went on between the trio on a past version of their lives you will only be seen in the chapter that I’ll start writing, hopefully today.

Oh, and Hermione was not afraid to tell Harry. He already knows. She just didn’t want to bring up bad memories.

Tks,

LW
 

honey89
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 16/07/06
HI!

okay, now it's my turn to say something about ur story. And I promise, it's a lot of good stuff.

so, ... well ... I found ur story and read the first chapters. (It was already translated into german, but I didn't want to wait until the translater would update the next chap.) But I was shocked how much text this was.

BUT I read it all on two days. I read day and night. Cause it is SOOOOOOOOO well written. It's awesome!

This is a story with lot of love, hate, sadness. All at the same time. And this story confused me sometimes BUT then....a few pages later evrything was clear again... and....it's impossible to describe HOW good this story is.

And trust me, it really is. There were some little mistakes in it. Spelling mistakes, you know, but that doesn't matter at all.

And these scenes. Very well written. wow. really. The scene I liked most was the last one.

He sighed. She sighed.
She sighed. He sighed.

wow.

that was quite to much for me. But then....in the remembering part....awesome.

When you described how Harry cast the spell. WOW. I sat in front of my PC and I cried. I cried so many tears. It was so sad. But it was all for love. I had to dry my tears so I could continue reading. Otherwise that wasn't possible. But few lines later tears began to fall again.

So you see what u have done to me. Your story touched me so deeply. I was caught in your story, you know. My mum doesn't speak english. And she came into my room and asked me something. I told her to leave me alone. To come back later. But, well...I said it in english.

Yeah, that's what you've done to me.

But I thank you for doing this! I love your story. It's the best I've ever read.

I love your style to write. I love these romantic scenes in your story. The let my heart jump. It's like walking in the rain. (I love the rain, you know.) It's so much happiness.

I am longing to read more from you and this story. Hope, you will update soon. If not, I will die. My heart will die. And that's not what u want, is it?

thank you very much for writing this story!!!!

bye, honey89
Author Feedback: Hi honey89,

I guess I own you a huge apologize. You have presented me with such a beautiful review four months ago and only now I’m sending you this reply. I’m really, really sorry...And I hope you are still alive.

I don’t usually post fast...and as you have notice I’m not always around...Honestly, it’s been years since the last time I’ve visited a forum to just read random posts about the HP world...My life has been very time consuming...

Thanks for all the tears you shed reading my ‘little’ story. Thanks for all the compliments. Thanks for really enjoying your reading experience...

Hopefully, the next chapter will be up soon.

LW
 

SpecialK220
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 11/07/06
Wow. That was really awesome. I've just read the ENTIRE story, and trust me, that's really hard to do in one sitting! Very addicting and well-written. I love the plot- it's so unique and clever and

so very confusing! wow, i feel my head spinning even as i write this anyways, the confusion only added to the addiction, so i suppose it's a good thing.

You are a great writer and definitely have an awesome talent. I can't wait for you to update!
Author Feedback: One sitting? Really? OMG. I don't think I would be able to read this fic in one sitting -- even if I had the time. It's always good to know that my confusing style and plot can still captivate a reader....

Talent? Me? I'm flattered...

Thank you very much for your kind words!

LW
 

Dreana
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 09/07/06

Please UPDATE SOON!!! I love the way you use metaphors and similes for this story it kind of brings it all alive!
Author Feedback: Yes, I just love a good metaphor and the old ambiguity of words....Glad you liked them as well.

Thank you!
 

dumbles
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 07/07/06
*sob* *sniff*

That last part was simply beautiful!!! This is my all time fav HP fic and I'm waiting with baited breath for the next chapter!!!
Author Feedback: Your all time fav HP fic??
Ah, that's so sweet...
Thank you.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 06/07/06
WOW!!! I JUST SPENT THE LAST 2 DAYS READING YOU'RE FIC.IT'S VERY WELL WRITTEN,I LOVE YOU'RE STYLE,,AND THE SONGS AND THE STORY LINE, HARRY AND HERMIONE'S RELATIONSHIP AND THEIR PERSONALITIES ARE VERY INTRIGUEING.i LIKE HOW YOU WROTE DUMBLEDORE, I REALLY DIDN'T LIKE HIM FOR A WHILE,STILL DON'T BUT LESS THAN BEFORE. tHE GUARDIANS, THE ONE,LIFETIMES UPON LIFETIMES OF THIS VICIUOS CYCLE.LOL!qQ MY HEAD IS SPINING

iT'S A BRILLIANT FIC AND I LOVE THE CONCEPT ABOUT CHANGING YOUR DESTINY AND REWRITTING IT, BUT DOES IT GARAUNTEE THAT IT WILL CHANG FATE'S PLANS???? BRILLIANT.GREAT WORK.
Author Feedback: WOW!!!
Thanks you whoever you are for such a good review. You complimented my plot, my style, my musical taste...wow...Thanks!
 

CatiannaGranger
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 05/07/06
Amazing! I seriously can't get enough of this story. There's always so much going on, so much still to discover, and I love eb=very minute of it. I really cannot wait to see how everything will end... happy hopefully! Keep up the great work and post as soon as you can!
Author Feedback: Hi Catianna,

Thanks again for another kind review... It’s always good to know that people are still not bored to death with my story...Yep...always something going on....always something to discover...I guess that’s the way it’s going to be until the very end, maybe even past that.

Keep hoping for a happy end. Who knows? You might even get one...
 

acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 03/07/06
oh wow. how sad.

how very sad and confusing!

they had a little boy apparently....but when? in one of their past lives and they've probably had to go back further in time each time a life failed.

JEEZ. poor harry and hermione! the loss. the despair at failing again at something, losing james, harry holding a dead hermione, a dead harry with hermione sobbing....i bet thats happened too.

WOW. how sad.

update soon!
melissa
acoustics1220
Author Feedback: Hi Melissa,

I know it's been a while but ...Thanks for your review.

Harry and Hermione had a son on their "first life". After losing him, they lost each other, then the world ended...then they were back to a second attempt (but no James this time and any other time)...then a third...and so on...

Harry holding a dead Hermione.? Yep! Many times...
Hermione holding a dead Harry? Never. He is an Immortal...and I don't mean the ones like Highlander than can die..Ii mean a type of Immortal that can not really die, mostly because they are not really alive...

Thanks...Hope you keep reading and enjoying it.
 

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