To be honest I was surprised that it took this turn for the last five chapters...it was really unexpected. I do love this story though, it made me tear up a few (a lot) of times...
I really hope that you would continue writing this! |
| |
loonette7Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 08/02/08
OOOoooohhh!!!! Sounds very interesting.  Harry married to Hermione, Dumbledore killing Harry's son, and Ron is blind with jealousy.
Nice work!! |
| |
|
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! Haha, sorry. That was a magnificent chapter; I had actually forgotten about this story but it was very welcome when I logged into my inbox and saw it had been updated. Another excellent chapter and I cannot wait for the next! I do hate all of this suspense though.. |
| |
YunuenUnsigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 04/12/06
Hi
Long time without actuallitation, don't do it again please, it was torture, and you still keeping it so sad and hopeless, why do you like to make them suffer so much, and why do you post a really short chapter?, please Like christams gift can you give us a long chapter or maybe two, yes, pleaseeeeee?
Thank you again, was very well written and very well developed, as always is a pleasure to read you.
Yunuen |
| |
RanisSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 03/12/06
Interesting tale thus far, weirdest fanfic I've read to be sure. But I like it.
First few chapters were confusing enough to make me tear out my hair but I struggled on, waiting to see where the tale was going. Certain went past some aspects I didn't like, I think Scenes II was the worst part, the chapter of 5 lines with the lyrics to a song swamping it.
I never liked people threading songs through the text, thats a personal opinion tho. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't and you seem to have both in this fic so I give you your due congratualtions on that. I also like your selection of songs, got some really good ones so far.
I like the way you started on the 4th book and molded the tale around the subsequent books. The scene with Sirus being saved by Crookshanks was confusing but I like having him around. Your approach with Neville was inspired, and the chapter of past universes and how they led to this one was very good.
All in all I'm afraid to say had I started reading this when you were only up to chapter 10 or so I probabily wouldn't have bothered to keep reading, but now I'm quite looking forward to how this tale ends.
A most excellent piece of work, keep writing,
Ranis, |
| |
andy16Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 03/12/06
I'm speechless. I really thought you had abandoned this story! When I saw that you had updated I really couldn't believe it... it was an amazing chapter. I mean, the whole relationeship between Harry and Hermione in the story is just beautiful. Thank you for the update. Better late than never! |
| |
alayneniSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 03/12/06
Fantastic chapter. It was great. I can't wait for the next chapter. Can't Hermione just get pregnant again and have James? Wouldn't that be the same as brining him back? |
| |
wtf? dude! omg. omg. omg. thank you so much for updating!!! DUMBLEDORE KILLED JAMES? bastard. how could he? just bc he though Harry woulndt be able to win along side Hermione? argh. bastard. poor James. Oh, I want James to come back. I want Voldemort gone. This sotry is freaking fantastic and you know it! really really love it. great chapter. it had eveerything i wanted. i hope you don't take such a long time for the next one, but i'll wait, i promise. i'll wait. |
| |
jacienlSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 02/12/06
What a happy time to see the new Chapter
keep a fanfic written right after GoF close to all six canons! Yeh, it's very interesting - difficult, but interesting as well. I like your "crazy"
By the way, I sent an e-mail to your mailbox in September. Now I'm afraid it might be lost? The e-mail is like that:
Dear littlewitch,
Hi. I read your fanfic "Forever a Secret" and reviewed once. You gave feedback:
You read a translated copy??? Translated to which language? When? Where?
Humph...
Thank you for reviewing...and for all your efforts in reading the original...believe I know how it's hard to deal with a language that is not your own.
The answer is yes. Don't be doubt. You have hundreds of Chinese readers at least (731 reviews and 61442 hits).
It is sort of an abashed thing. I didn't suppose it's without authorization. The first time when your fic had been translated to Chinese was in 2004. There was few translated fanfic at Chinese HP forums then - it might cause the mistake on copyright (the similar case is infrequent by now). However, I have to say thanks to her, or I wouldn't know such a wonderful fic (this is my antinomy). After that, four more people did the translated work, more or less.
Actually, I'm desirous to contact/unite all the referred translators to neaten and proofread those sporadic sections and continue translating, so more HHr fans in China could read a better edition. In any case, I think that I should solicit your permission first and wish that it isn't too late to do it. Maybe it sounds zany or boldfaced, but I'm serious and pure-hearted. I'll try my best to do this work if you consent.
Forgive my imperence. I just love your fanfic so much.
yours sincerely,
JacieNL |
| |
BorSLGSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 02/12/06
Okay, I am still reading, and at this point in the story, I am hoping that HArry destroys Dumbledore (I mean, he is really over-stepping his bounds). They better have an intense conflict coming soon. Great job |
| |
BorSLGSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/12/06
Okay, I am reading this one through, and thought I would review after this chapter because I liked the fact that Harry figured something out. Sometimes, I find Hermione centered fics sort of make Harry and Ron into these oblivious guys who can't figure anything out. I am interested to see how Voldemort was defeated, and how Hermione fits in it. |
| |
SchokkiSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 02/12/06
Yeeeeeeeeah! An update!
The story is amazing! It's getting weirder and weirder (but in a good way) and I love it! I love it that Harry is not really human and all powerful, that Trevor, Crookshank, ... play a big part and that Snape and Draco are on the light side, that, the Order is still active and that Sirius is alive! That must be the most creative story I've ever read!
Well, did Dumbledore die or why are his eyes blank? Well, better he died of a natural cause than suffer the fate that Harry would bring upon him, right?
Anyway, I'm really, REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!^^ Keep up the great work! |
| |
skyaceSigned | Chapter : 23 | Date : 02/12/06
Wow.. Cheers an update!  It's been so long - I think I'll have to re-read from the beginning to refresh my memory  But it's almost over isn't it
Did he really....? To Dumbledore? ... shudder. You have very powerful writing |
| |
Oh My Goodness Gracious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's been a while since you’re last update, and the story gets weirder and weirder by the chapter! Hahahah but weird in a very, very good way!!!!
I love the story; I love what you have made of it! I love the fact that Harry it's some kind of god, mystical being or something like that! I love it! He is supposed to be this incredible super being and yet he remained human because he falls in love! I love it!! And, have I said that I love the story? Hahahahahahaha
I hope you update soon! I can't wait for a new chapter!!! And I can't believe how much time has passed since I start reading your awesome story!! So much has changed in my life and yet I'm still here, that’s why I thank you for continuing writing the story. Because when I think how my life is now from when I started reading, I can only imagine how your life has changed, how things are for you now… So thank you!!!
I’m sooooo glad that I started reading all those years ago and that I’m still reading! I love your story sooo much!!!!!!!!! It’s awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a great writer!!
Hope to seeya soon! Until then!!! |
| |
Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 23 | Date : 02/12/06
dumbledore killed james!what the hell!that was by surprise.and so was this chapter, to be honest I hac forgotten this story since its been so long. but hopefully you will update sooner. not trying to be mean here ok. update soon |
| |
|