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kiki08
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 04/08/07
hey!!!
i love that you made a list of all the pick-up lines and i hope that you will keep going
i love these kinds of stories
and it was soooo~~~ sweet with james god you have to love him
ohh and i like the line with the oppoiste day that was soo funny there were others but can think of them right now
but a lot were funny
keep up the good work and starting to read other stories that you written or typed
 

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goyaverouge
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 29/07/07
"James: "Chicks dig me."


Lily: "Insulting."


James: "I wear colored underwear."


Lily: "Disturbing." "

this one is def my fav!
 

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goyaverouge
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/07/07
\"James: \"Hey, Evans, hey! Come here!\"


Lily: Walks over slowly. \"Yeah?\"


James: \"There are 265 bones in your body. Want one more?\"\"

hahahaha!!! this one was amazing!
 

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TKDPrincess121
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 24/07/07
FINALLY! She finally said yes. This was so cute, very smiley I lovelovelovelove your James, he's adorable. *waves* I'll go out with you, James! Onward!
Author Feedback: Haha I'm glad you liked it! And I would go out with James too (secretly)
 

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SS Felton
Unsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 17/07/07
I have to say it again... OMG! I absoulotely loved it. You did great. Maybe you can write another?
 

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SS Felton
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/07
OMG! This is awesome! I was giggling the whole time! I could just imagine James and Lily interracting in your story. Great job
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 21/06/07
At the very end you changed perspective. It was all James did this, Lily did that and then all of a sudden you were saying "where my hand was" and "I said"
 

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lil_irish_girl
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 18/06/07
I love this fic. It's so cute! I don't normally read L/J fanfic, but your title caught my eye. I'm sure glad it did! Keep up the awesome work!!!

lil_irish_girl
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
OMG! OMG! OMG! I absolutely love all of them! I think I like the last one the most.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/05/07
ahahaha im surprised james never used the "hey i lost my number, can i have yours?" lily's retort would have been great.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/05/07
wow this james is persistant. what was up with the catfish belly one?
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/07
the string around the heart was great. hope the next 80 are just as good
 

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deamonumber666
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 26/05/07
*claps*

I love this fanfic. It's adorable. I think it's the perfect relationship. I wish I was Lily in this.
 

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purple_jbo
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/05/07
Favorite:
James: "You're so beautiful that I would marry your brother just to get in your family."

Lily: "Wow. I didn't know you were gay. Plus, I don't have a brother."

Very funny stuff. I rate this a 10, but I didn't find them as funny as the first batch.


 

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purple_jbo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/05/07
My favorite:
James: "There are 265 bones in your body. Want one more?"

That made me laugh out loud. I loved it. I can see someone saying these lines in a bar (and have for a few of them) only to be slapped and not know why. I rate this a 10.
 

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