Very good. Yes, I think Luna could well be a 'hell, boy' type of girl, once she reaches a certain point.

Thank you for the story!

Yay!! At last their Ron!inhibitions were removed!!

This is a thoroughly enjoyable story; written well, the first-person mode is a nice change, and the core idea of Harry and Hermione having to resist their attraction because of Ron - the way you've set it up - an original one indeed.

And I liked the continual reminder of Luna's presence, there in the background, ready to grab her chance. I had to applaud, though, when I read her "washing my hair" and such excuses; I'm glad she didn't lower herself to the role of an object for Ron to use to make Hermione jealous.

On to the final chapter!!

This was absolutely lovely - just what I needed to pick up my spirits. It was a wonderful, sweet little story. Great work!

I loved it! It was hilarious and I often cracked a smile while reading this story. Great job!

You are one of my favorite writers. This story is spot on perfect. The hints of "old romance" reminds me of Audrey Hepburn in her heyday. The timing and utter TRUTH to this story is completely compelling. You weave a wonderful yarn, and how I imagine it would be exactly between them all.

Plus, at some points, it was right hysterical. Like Luna's washing and drying and then needing to pee. Or Ginny's Batbogeying Harry through the floo, and of course the heel and behave.

Wonderful job. You are a superb author.

Such a lovely story! And so funny too! You did such an amazing job on this one! Thanks for sharing!!!

~ Tanja ~

This was absolutely marvelous. I adored Harry's narrative point of view and the surprising depth to his and Hermione's connection. The fact that they both cared so deeply about Ron's happiness simply underlined his importance to them both, and I suspect will make their ever after truly a happy one.

Thank you.

I love this story.great job!
could I translate it into Chinese?
waiting for your reply

I deleated my list of favourite storys in a fit of anger after DH. So now I'm having fun finding them again. This is still one of my favourites.

Ron deserves about as much consideration as he pays others....which is little to none 99% of the time. Harry should give Ron two weeks to mope and then kick him in the balls....that is what a reasonable bloke would do.

Granted this is written from by a woman from a man's perspective so I can't complain too much. We tend to have similar emotional responses as women, we just don't drag them out usually. At least that has been my personal experience, and those of my friends when going through a break up.

~Matt

Your way of crafting a story makes my periods of procrastination a pleasure.

I love that bit about the fluxweed and the hate potion. Genius!

FANTASTIC.
This entire short story was written really well. It was concise and smooth. There were no awkward lines or wordings. You held me captivated!

maybe a lame question,
but what is "UST"?
-scampers off to read the rest-

wow great story, i loved it, perfect actually, i read one of your stories a while back i think, i gonna go read some more now, awesome!!