anaritaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/08
I absolutely love this song and I couldn't believe you had actually done a story based on it.  It's really good, nice job!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/07
I'm madly in love with this song....Actually my iPod decided to be ironic and its playing right now. I love the dialogue only. Its so hard sometimes to convey a story through just speech.
Overall, its completly brilliant |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/07
I'm madly in love with this song....Actually my iPod decided to be ironic and its playing right now. I love the dialogue only. Its so hard sometimes to convey a story through just speech.
Overall, its completly brilliant |
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RowenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/06
aww, that was so cute. I loved how you told the whole story in the form of phone calls. (At least I think they were phone calls.) |
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Great Story, even thought the whole cheating thing does not agree with me but I love this song and your story has made me like it even more, I think of Harry and Hermione!!! If you are going to more song fics I think you would do really good with Irreplaceable by Beyonce, Having Hermione kicking Ron out and Harry coming over in a minute!!! Great song fic!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/12/06
that goes very well with the song i knew the song quite well before i even saw this fic. i really enjoyed reading this keep it up. |
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It was a good read. I just could see Hermione would cheat back out of revenge coz I saw how she used that Cormac guy to get a rise out of Ron on HBP. Even though I couldn't see Harry would be a cheating bf type-he'd always had his eyes only for his crushes(Cho,Ginny)in the books not having wandering eyes like other guys... However every humanbeing makes an mistake so I think your story wasn't out of order.  Personally I never forgive cheating bfs, coz I know they have a tendency to do it again. One time I so loved my second bf I desperately wanted to forgive him but in the end I found myself I couldn't wholy trust him again. I couldn't trust him whevern he's with another girl so I had to leave him. So I'm glad at least Hermione was strong enough to trust Harry again. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/12/06
awww  that was so sweet. I liked how the whole entire setting was centered around their phone conversations. mmmm...Now Iam gonna read some more of your stories. (I  the Gaurdian by the way) |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/12/06
wow! I love that song!
That's a really cool idea of how u made the whole thing into like a phone conversation!
AWESOME JOB! |
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JulesySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/12/06
I think I may have corrupted morals. I know cheating is bad. The guilt you feel for cheating on someone you care about. But for some reason I love stories that, if Ron and Ginny have...'interrupted' with the natural order of things, that Harry and Hermione still find away to be together, and even if they are cheating, it just seems right. Know what I mean?
I liked the way you have written the story, after the first conversation I was half expecting it to go into normal story structure but it still carried across very very well.
Your a gifted writer. Keep up the smashing work!
Kudos. Happy Holiday Season to You and Yours. |
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wow. when i saw the summary of this in my email i pretty well freaked. i've been going through something like this... well like the summary.. and i though yea this is my kind of story right now.. if you took out the part where Ginny cheats that'd be me.. so thank you for this story and you're perfect timing with it. beautifully written.. great job as with all of your stories....
Happy Christmas (Ramble on)
 dysfunctionalspirit |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/12/06
That was very sweet. I like the way how it was mostly done in dialogue. It's very hard to write that way. Wondeful ideas. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/12/06
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Different but I like it. It is nice to read something different and it still turns out happy  Thanks for the extra present!! |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/12/06
Awwww... wonderful! I loved it, especially the ending -that was a very sweet little moment. Great job as usual. Thanks for sharing and I hope you're having a Merry Christmas as well.
~Cat |
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