miss hobbles you have out done your self again that was just brilliant my friend please write more oneshots and your stories as well.
sondra

Aside from the fact that she let him off way too easily for being a daft git who couldn't see his hand in front of his face at high noon in the middle of the Sahara desert, not to mention his cheek at assuming that she was just waiting around to accept his proposition, a nice little story. I still think she should've made him grovel -- a lot -- before giving in, though.

That was a wonderful story! Although, I wish that it was longer! I'd like to have found out what happened from the time they woke up. Maybe you could continue the story and fill in the gap before they ended up with kids? Great job!

Thwweeett... couldnt you make it a wee bit longer, though? I'll never understand this whole 'Thou Shalt Not Fall In Love With Your Best Friend' rule that so many fanfic authors seem to assume exists.

But I enjoyed it.

that was great and so real, not like most fanfics i rad, it was great and since it is a one shot you mightwant to put completed it says in progress right now, but anyway great job i really loved it! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !