Thank you for continuing your epic story.
In my opinion you're one of the major authors in H/Hr fanfiction.
I love your stories and especially the painting of the characters in it. So keep up the good work and thank you for many hours of reading it.

Patrick

woohoo about time for another chapter! xD
I missed this! hahaha kept on watching out for it.

Lots of tension in this chapter o_o
and a cliffie at the end!!! whhhyyy x_x
I hope updates are going to come more often now, yeah?

hehe Love it

Dude your back so cool. I hope you have bin ok its great to see your writting agin. Update soon you left us a cliffi. Thanks for keeping it going.

Wow. And Here I was having completely forgotten about this story thinking that at some point it had been finished and then I get an email notice saying that there’s an update. So what do I find myself doing? Jumping for joy of course!
It never ceases to amaze me how much darker each new chapter is from the last.
I think my very first word of this review puts into perspective my thoughts on this chapter. Wow.
And then you leave us with a cliffy (who ever said writers aren’t twisted ). Great chapter.
This one was just as good and better than the ones before. The deeper and darker this gets the more I want to know what’s going to happen. Kudos. This was another amazing chapter. Keep up the good work and I can, but I can’t wait for the next.

excellent. it's about time! what took you so long???? You know you are ruled by your fans, therefore, any personal problems you may have need to be put on the back burner until this story is finished.

Thanks again.

Lori

PS been 2 Vegas lately?

Glad to have you- and this wonderful story- back!

A great, action-packed chapter to bring us back in, too. There's so much going on, that happened in the last chapter, I can't wait to see how it all plays out in the long-distance.

The New Voldemort angle is very interesting. I'm really interested to see what kind of spin you put on it, as you have a fancy knack of not following typical storyline tropes. I'm sure there's not only a wrinkle here, but many to turn the situation away from that of "another voldemort."

Hope to read more chapters soon.
Keep up the great work.

The story is not dead, he needs more time or motivation.

Please Please Please tell me your going to update this soon. I think I've re read it three times since the last update. I need More, you left us all hanging!!

YOU have me sitting on the adge of my seat waiting for the for the next chapter well done

Hi!

It took me some time to read through all of it, but I managed. I must confess that I was sometimes ready to stop reading as I am a huge fan of happy endings with no casualties or at least only the bad ones dieing. Nevertheless I really like your story and its prequel to be precise and the way you developed the characters. Love it I am looking forward to the next chapter.

x

Aquilara

Hey babe! Missing you so much. I hope no harm has come to you as I shall surely die if you don't finish this wonderful work of art. ) Seriously though. We know you have alot going on (it being summer and all) so we will wait patiently ( until you return to us. Be safe.

As Always,

Lori

You have an amazing talent for writing H/Hr fic I loved the plot twist, action, romance and evrything else in this story.

Keep up the good work

But I did notice that it has been a while since you updated I hope that haven't abandoned the story and left us hanging....

Come back soon and show us some more of your amazing, wandless magic *wink*

~ Elite

Alright what is up with you I know I haven't been here lately but I didn't expect you to stop the story either especially for this long. Buddy you are a great writer and that is exactly what you should be doing. In fact I've been writing a story of my own not on portkey though just to myself on 26,016 words not a lot it took me about two weeks for most of it and still had time for school, and poetry. Great chapter I'm reviewing so I would like you to write, PLEASE if you may.

I would like to know what are mary janes, I am not American and know little of American slang, I would much like it if you explained, or even wrote your story in the English that is taught all around the world except America. thank you

Hi there, I have just got to point this out, I mean I have read your stories with great enjoyment, it just this Wotcher you keep having Tonks say, Wotcher is simple slange for hello or good day to you, it is not a word that is used to start any other conversation nor is it used as an exclamation. I hope you will use this little bit of knowledge to good advantage.