chris7100Signed | Chapter : 26 | Date : 10/09/09
Interesting chapter. Thanks for the list of kids - it certainly helps with regard to the various Weasleys. |
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chris7100Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 09/09/09
What a fabulous series! I hope you haven't abandoned it! Vibrant characters, original plot, strong voice - wonderful! |
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This is really good, but you left us with a cliffhanger. I enjoy the way you describe the scene and how closely connect all the characters especially with one another. Thanks for posting |
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This is a truely wonderful story. I can't wait to read the rest of it. I'm glad I found it. Good work! |
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illasSigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 17/08/09
An excellent update: proof that you remain comfortably among the best authors on Portkey.org in terms of sheer talent and creativity.
So *please* keep this one going! You, and we (the readers), have invested so much energy, passion and joy and come so far with your characters an dstories for them to fizzle out and remain unfinished.
Thanks again for so many hours of wonderful, life-changing(!) reading, and best wishes re: completing this mighty beast. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 26/06/09
when is this to be completed?
i am really enjoying this but now find myself at a loose end. |
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DianaUnsigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 28/05/09
Gah! This is the second time I have read through the stories of this universe - more has happened in this saga since the last read-through. I do not think, however, that the last time you ended the most recent chapter with such an evil cliffhanger. PLEASE update soon! |
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JamesUnsigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 15/05/09
This has been bouncing around my mind for a while so I\'m gonna label a few of my ideas out.
The way you write about the Potter/Blacks and God knows what ever else there related to, you make them sound all powerful, like they have no equals and you write about them and to me they just seem like big headed, ego maniacs who are basically completely arrogant and feel they will control everything or they will suffer there gigantic power and die, I am almost begging you to cut down the size of their heads, make their power seem insignificant against someone/something, anything, I really like this story but this bit kinda ruins it for me.
Also how about killing off some of the good guys, I don\'t think any of them have died yet, where\'s the fun in that, this isn\'t meant to be a fairytale is it ?, let Harry and Hermione die and see the rest of them lot struggle to kill the dark Lord, that would be much more entertaining(I know the good guys always win but the Bad Guy\'s gotta have some Vitories right ?)
Anything, just kill a few of them and let it really hit home about how death is close to them. |
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cretin770Signed | Chapter : 45 | Date : 13/05/09
Great story! I read Circle last year...Are you continuing? I'm sure I'm not the only one looking forward to the next chapter. |
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HoratioSigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 02/05/09
This is not so much a review as a comment, as I have not read this chapter or most of the previous chapters. Your Circle's End was, by far and away, the best Harry and Hermione story I have ever read. However, I do not like to put my time into a story which I am not certain will be eventually completed. I realize that you have a life away from writing this story and it cannot be your first priority. However, unless I know that you will complete this story some day, I have been unable to muster the motivation to read only the first six or seven chapters, which I have done several times
After that I lose hope as I cannot stand investing my life into a story which I will never read to the end. Do you still think you will complete this story someday? Here's hoping |
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greendotSigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 26/03/09
Ok. Sooooo ready for the next update. Do I need to send Ebuni1 after you???
Lori |
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Nice chapter Madscientist. That was one intense battle. Rain was crazy. I'm glad that Sirius got that blast out in time to keep Harriet alive, although I know you wouldn't have had her die... Because that just wouldn't be cool.
I'm intrigued to find out what's going to happen next and how this battle's going to turn out in the end. Update soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 16/03/09
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 02/03/09
Great book. Hey are you planing on finishing your War of Shadows? |
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KergmaSigned | Chapter : 45 | Date : 16/02/09
Please write more soon. I'm dieing to know what happens next.  |
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