Oh brilliant, that was really cute. Sun and Moon, heehee, that's not so farfecthed for names actually, lol. I hope to read the other version of yours soon, but this one was just delightful  Can't wait to see if you write anymore fics! Keep writing and post more soon! |
Author Feedback: The names are what happens when Hermione isn't there to moderate Luna  There are a lot of fics here...most of them a tad longer than this. |
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MikeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
Thanks for the Christmas present! It was a real tear jerker there for a minute. Great job! |
Author Feedback: You're welcome |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
Great story. Can't wait to see what you post for christmas. |
Author Feedback: Only 4 days away... |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
That was a very good little one shot. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Thanks |
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I cried with a smile on my face. I swear I could feel all the emotions that H/Hr were going through and I love how you kept Ron's emotional range and Luna's loonyness (their adorable girls - OMG!). I really look forward to your stories. |
Author Feedback: Thanks....just like I planned it |
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very nice... quite slow paced but it was executed brilliantly. I look forward to the AO version |
Author Feedback: As do I |
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mrrlyn42Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
As always you have out done yourself! I normally avoid angst fics... but your rocked!!! Man, I cant wait till you start a sequel to circle or something new(hint-hint)! |
Author Feedback: Hmmmmm......... |
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Old ChuckUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
The reason that Hermione and Luna corrected Ron 'unthinkingly' was that they were wrong. He was entirely correct saying, "... with Luna and me." A preposition requires the objective case; consider saying it as a statement like, "... with us." Would it not appear wrong to say, "... with we." Pardon my pedantry, I was not trying to offend. It is a lifetime of proofreading to blame.
I enjoyed the story. I will read more.
Thanks, Old Chuck |
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Ohhhhh, what a lovely story, wish there was more. I always want more though. I'll be watching for anything new. Happy Holidays and happy writing. |
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That was wonderful! I'd love to read further stories set in this universe, if for no other reason that I loved Ron and Luna's twins, Sun and Moon. They're one of the more original incarnations of the next generation that I've seen. You've also created a very rich setting for the story, with lots of possibilities for expansion. Arthur is MoM, Ginny's a bitch (big surprise there), Malfoy's an absentee dad and probably up to mischief...there's just so much elbow room in which to write! Even a series of vignettes would be great, you could use this universe as a palate cleanser whenever writer's block rears its head.
Even if you don't continue, would you mind if borrowed Sun and Moon down the line? They're just too much fun to have a one-shot life! |
Author Feedback: Honestly, I did this one off the cuff, and they just grew.
I very well might, you never know. Right now I'm up to 4 universes...at least, Lions, Circle, Interlude (H/Hr/LL Not on PK obviously,) and the Brain Trust (LJ) ...what's another.
Sure, Sun and Moon are welcome to visit...maybe they could get a future role in intervention...hint hint. |
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LiZzUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
Awww!! I loved every single second of this!! It was so great! Very sweet and the perfect ending! Hey maybe a little sequal or something about a wedding and some little Potters?? Please, please...if you could...haha |
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Awww. *squish* Thank you, sincerely, for one of the nicest Christmas gifts I have ever received. Nothing like a little holiday fluff to get the tear ducts working. (yes, I cried, I'm not made of stone) This has truly made my night. |
Author Feedback: You're welcome... A little fluff, a touch of angst... And maybe a touch of happiness if I can get the the NC-17 version done for new years or so. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
Most likely there will be the NC-17 version of this fic, as your probably know I can't resist it. If it's written, I'll try to have it up for New Years.
YAY!!!! I am soooo looking forward to your writing. It's great. I even shed a few tears. But please no NC17 on that bitch gin and that sexy arse draco. |
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Thanks for the early Christmas Present...it was good to have your Ron and Luna back after losing them in Circle.
Loved the short-printed action figure reference. |
Author Feedback: Ron and luna did wander off the screen...I cried at that.
Doesn't it just suck when they short pack them... |
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pg or NC 17 -t it is fabulous - I was already in a good mood thius evening, then had the alert in the email, to read just before my beloved wife got home - and she gets the real hugs that your wonderful story inspired
thanks for sharing your wonderful stories |
Author Feedback: I'm glad that I improved your night |
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