Amusingly, grammatically speaking, Ron was right in the "...with Luna and me..." statement that both girls corrected him for.

Excellent story. I'm working my way through your work slowly but surely.

This was lovely.
Having Harry arrange for Hermione to go somewhere to be safe and have her dreams was perfectly in character. Having Hermione go to make Harry happy was also in character, as was having her help him from afar. Thus, your characterizations were perfect.
I loved the little details that showed how much Harry missed Hermione over these years - how he has a closet of presents for her, how he is certain every year he is seeing her, how he has the ring kept for her at his home.
The twins Sun and Moon are adorable blends of Ron and Luna. It would be nice to see them again.
The story was very well written. Two small things: there was a little typo in the beginning, it should be resolute and not irresolute, and having the girls correct Ron's "with Luna and me" was wrong. But as I said, the story was well written and was really enjoyable. Fabulous job!

I loved the story! I wish it would really end like this in the books. Harry and Hermione are perfect for each other, as are Ron and Luna. But since that will probably not happen (0ne can never lose the faith!)we have writers like you! I truly enjoyed the story and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work. Thank you!!

"his Gringles have been all out of whack."
so so so cute

it was the perfect christmas fic

So I finally got a chance to read this and I'm so glad that I did! I thought it was nicely paced and it almost felt like a series of vignettes, some slices of "everyday" life that all came together to tell a lovely story. And Sun and Moon were absolutely precious! I loved that they wore pendants - to help Ron tell them apart? LOL. Anyways, thanks for writing thins and Merry Christmas!

I read the story a few night ago, but didnt have the time to write a review. I definitely enjoyed the christmas fic; cant seem to find enough of them.

Hope to see more from you in the near future. We all loved the Circle's universe, so you could start there and work your way around

Merry Christmas,

Robertk

in put song for chrismas.
We wish you a Marry chrismas and a Happy New year.
we wish you a marry chrismas and a happy new year.
to you and your Family and wishing a marry Chrismas and a Happy new year!
I love story that has holday cheer and Harry and Hermione together in the end.
And say of the end it's time for me to go form this comment.
Tha tha that's all floks!.

Very good. It took me a while to read it but definatly worth the time. It was great and I can't wait to see what else you may have up soon!

*%* Susanna *%*

Good one!
A nice, short, deep, and beliveable Christmas flic.
Thank you for that.

That is a great fic. I loved it. How beatifully done. I can't wait to read the other one once you get it up. Well, this encaptured all that is happy and good in HP world. Lovely.

How very endearing! I hope there is a nc-17 version. You write very well. Thank you!

I love this little one shot. It was so sad, but then so sweet by the end. I can't wait for your little surprises

Very touching. Awesome work. So, was that bloke Hermione wrote about meeting an actual person, or just a probe about Harry's feelings? If he was real, how serious was it? What about Harry's relationships in the 4 years? Would love to see more of this universe. Then again, I love all of your universes. Keep up the great work and Happy Holidays!

Aw, I love Christmas stories, they're so cute! I liked it, I really did.

He sighed, and watched as Harry nuzzled Hermione's neck absently, "You know the Prophet will be all over you two...it was bad enough with Luna and me..."

"And I," both women corrected him unthinkingly.

So funny thing about the correction.. for once Ron was right. I know they teach in school that it's so and so and I but in the world of proper grammar more often than not, me is the proper term. Think about it like this: if you took out the other person's name would it still make sense? For example:

Harry and I went to the store. (If you took out Harry the sentence 'I went to the store' would make sense. So in that instance you would use I and not me.)

However in the statement, "Dean is coming to the store with Harry and I." we know that I is not the proper term to use because the question, "Dean is coming to the store with I?" is not properly worded, but it is if me is used. So the gramatically correct sentence would read "Dean is coming to the store with Harry and me." ("Dean is coming to the store with me.")

In the case of your writing with Hermione and Luna's corrections "You know the Prophet will be all over you two...it was bad enough with I" is not correct.

Even Ravenclaws and Know-It-Alls get things wrong sometimes. ;-)

Keep writing I really like this story and can't wait to see what else happens.