haha awwwwh. this is adorable. It's normally the other way round, Ron not realising that they like each other.
“Ronald, how good will the shagging be?” oh that made me giggle 
good job
emily x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/06
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Oh my, Luna is simply delightful in this piece and I loved Ron's nervousness throughout. Nice bit with the passing Hufflepuff as well and how happy H/Hr are. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! That poor Hufflepuff is going to have a few nightmares after hearing Luna. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/06
Woo....go for Ron adn Luna. That was really adorable. Great job. Insanely great. Lovely job. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
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Author Feedback: Thank you! I had an awesome idea for a novel-length one this morning, but I'm not sure if I could pull it off. Besides, I'm working on Bewitched and I'm trying not to kill myself. Stupid plot bunnies. |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/06
Things are moving a bit fast, perhaps, especially with Luna's final comment, but otherwise a pretty little story with good fun. |
Author Feedback: Probably. I have a habit to do that. The shippiness just starts to leak out.  Thanks! |
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I knew we were on the same page, I just knew it. Have fun with your story.  |
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You've got my idea of Luna just about perfect. I have something similar to the folowing in a story I'm working on:
When H/Hr question Luna several days later about Ron's behavioural changes, Luna replied, "I made a few simple rules and if he's good he gets a treat."
Don't let me tell you how to write your story, if you like the idea use it - maybe you were going to anyway and I needn't have said anything.
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Author Feedback: LOL! I love that line. I already wrote it sadly, but I tell you, I'm going to have to use that one. Awesome. Thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/06
ha ha ha! how funny! i love it!!!! great story! if you could, please update ASAP! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'll probably wait a few days and then post the next one. |
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LOL, Luna reminds me of Anya from Buffy the Vampire Slayer! Thanks for adding hand holding, cute Harry/Hermione. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! H/Hr always have got to have some love, even in a Ron/Luna story. |
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Miss MadyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/06
Hobbes, wasn't this a reply to a challenge? I faintly/distinctly/maybe remember the "Merlin, that's not right," line.
Great job!
Miss Mady |
Author Feedback: Yeah, it is. I added that to the summary, all of my challenge responses are going to be added from now on. Considering I take so many of them up at any rate. Thank you! |
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This was superb! Really. This was very well written - and funny. I love Ron/Luna. This is my new favorite Ron/Luna piece, really.
You've got the characterizations and the situation perfect! Kudos to you.
diggingupophelia/sapphiretragedy |
Author Feedback: Oh, wow. Thank you bunches! This is my first ever Ron/Luna story so to be told it's a new favorite...wowser. |
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