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pretty
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 29/12/07
so WHEN are you going to FINISH it? it is a great story and i liked it. and i hopw you would finished! ans it IS a great story
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Wow, it's been so long since I looked at my chapter Statistics page.

Yes I will be finishing the story. I'm now getting back my writing muse. It left me for the holidays
 

jaimielh
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/12/07
Uh, oh. lmao Hermione wasn't paying attention??? I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next update. Hopefully it'll be out by New Years.
 

tard_288
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 17/08/07
Another very amusing chapter. Mini-Draco.. I really like how you written Draco in your story. You have made him one of the good guys but his arrogant side still pops up once in while to remind us what he was like in canon. You have given him a nice balance. In other stories, he is sometimes too good so that he is not even the same character anymore. You have given him a reason to change in Hermione's friendship towards him. Very nice job.. That was a very touching scene with Draco asleep with Nicholas...

It is soo funny that it is so obvious that everyone likes each other but are too afraid to get together. I think it is time for the Girls just to take charge. The guys are obviously too dense to figure it out on their own.

I think you have inserted Heather in when it was suppose to be Sarah again. I was actually confused when you named the people on the teams and there was no Sarah but a Heather instead. Not a big deal.

Wow, that was truly an evil ending you have there. A cliffhanger and now I have no more chapters to read. Please update soon so we can see Harry save Hermione.

I also wanted to thank you for taking the time to reply to everyone's reviews on your stories. I know that it takes alot of time and dedication to do that. You even go and respond to reviews of your older stories. That is a rarity for authors. Thank you once again and I look forward to seeing where you take this..
Author Feedback: your reviews always make me smile. I love replying to reviews and I've ticked the e-mail notification for reviews so I know when I get them no matter how old the story is. I'm a bit of a vain creature. When I leave reviews I like it when the author responds so I extend the same courtesy to all of my reviewers. I absolutely hate that FF.net doesn't let you reply to anonymous reviews.

(hits on head on desk repeatedly) I really thought I got all the Heather spots!!!!! AHHHH!!!

As for Draco, I like a good Draco but he must retain some of his bad boy self. I can't ever see Draco having a complete turn around. I absolutely enjoy throwing his arrogant side in becuase there's so much you can do with it.

Working on the next chapter. I think I'll Ginny take charge. She's just the fiery type Draco needs . In all my stories I have tendency to hook them up first. I don't I think it's just so easy to do that.
 

tard_288
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 17/08/07
This was probably my favorite chapter so far. It was so funny with them dealing with the children. At least they seem to be very well behaved. Alex even let Hermoine carry him without fussing much. So the seer is communicating with Hermione through her dreams now. Interesting. I wonder why Harry still has nightmares but then again having to face Voldemort when you are teenager might give you nightmares for the rest of your life.

I really enjoyed the interaction between the 6 friends during breakfast. You can just tell that they have been living with one another for a while and they just know each other. Truly enjoyed the bantering about. The kids were also written very well. Very precocious for their age, especially Sam. "His wife went to get us some food." and then "Not Yet"

The Patronus thing was soo funny. Almost laughed out loud again here at work.

"Harry don't you ever wake me up with that damn horse of yours again!" Ginny screamed.

"Harry, you Patroned us?" Luna said

The Girls are so much cooler then the guys right now. We have idiot Draco spitting grape juice all over his date and then we have meatwad Ron bumbling around with his one-night stand. Did those kids confound Ron into opening the door for them?? I am glad that Harry left them at the bar...

Wow, Harry and Hermione must be really close friends. Falling asleep and spooning a female friend might be a bit much. When Hermione woke up, there was no shock or anything. No, 'oh my god, why is Harry sleeping in my bed holding me close?' Surprised that she did not feel anything poking her in the back.
Author Feedback: Another great review from you. Hmm you're reading at work, either you work the night shift or you live on the other side of the world because it was night time when I replied to your reviews for chapter 1-3.

I know all about laughing out loud at work. I've done it several times. I'm glad you liked the funny scenes. I really enjoyed writing them.

Yes Harry and Hermione are quite close and I did contemplate having Hermione wake up to something poking her in her back but Harry was having a nightmare at the time, not dreams of his best friend.
 

tard_288
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/08/07
I am not sure what to think of Harry right now. He sure does seem to be trying hard to impress this girl and doing stupid things to do it. Did you mix up Sarah's name with Heather?? Ginny said something about Harry would tell Molly about Heather sooner or later. I am somewhat surprised that Ginny hates Harry's girlfriends so much. I am also feeling some tension between Draco/Ginny. Ron is basically a bumbling idiot. I wonder if he has had any girlfriends after Hermione? He seems so hopeless and dumb. There is also some Ron/Luna tension even though Ron seems too blind to even notice.

Ginny was kind of harsh there to Hermione. Not sure if I like Ginny or not even though she was being honest. And then we have idiot Harry who let his friends talk him into going on their date even though he knew Hermione was crying upstairs. At least we know that Harry kind of cares since held Hermione in bed for the night. That was sweet. Kind of makes up for not going to her immediately..

The plot at the very end is interesting. They are heading towards Godric Hollow before Wormtail finds them. Draco seems to be important as well. interesting....
Author Feedback: OMG!!!!! I mixed up Heather's name with Sarah's!!!! You're the first person to point it out. Originally when I first wrote this story, Harry dated Heather not Sarah but I decided to change it to a character outside of the Aurors. (hits head on desk for mistake) I thought I made all the necessary changes. I'm going to have to be careful with the rest of the updates.

This was the first story I submitted to the mods to be accepted as an author here. I was rejected because of spelling errors. It's a good thing to because I eventually submitted the first story in the Letters series to get accepted here and I did a major overhaul of this story. It's a much better story now than it was before.

As for Harry, I'm trying to depict him as wanting to enjoy life and feel what's it's like to be normal before he settles down. If you notice his comments about Sarah, he treats her like a casual date, not "she's the one". His soul already knows whose the one for him so he can't possibly view any other girl that way.

As for Ron and his past relationships, I honestly haven't really explored that yet but I could probably write a few lines in depicting a dating disaster.

Ginny is Harry's friend and I imagine as a friend she would dislike girlfriends that she felt weren't right for him or could influence him in the wrong directions. I should probably depict Luna's disapproval as well to show it's a friendship related issue.
 

tard_288
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/08/07
This chapter is soo Hermione. This is just something that you would think she would do once good of Voldie was vanguished. I am not sure about the whole playing Quidditch herself but if she thought of the idea, I am sure she would also participate. I believe this is actually the first time I have ever read anything like this. What a great way to unite the houses once and for all?!! Too bad JKR never thought of something like this to include in canon.

Now this is what the Auror department should be like. It should feel like the Ministry strike force instead of a bunch of bumbling detectives clueless as to what is going on and blindly following the Minister. I like it. Are we going to be introduced to the other people on these strike forces?? I did not recognize alot of the names.

I see that you brought Cho back into the picture. This should be interesting. You have even brought back b**ching Cho who complains that everything bad that happens in the world is 'precious' Hermione's fault. Very interesting beginning. Can't wait to see where you are taking this....
Author Feedback: You reviews are always fantastic. I felt that there was a need to address the separation between the houses in Hogwarts. I still feel that as long as Slytherin carried that stigma, nothing would change and another dark lord would emerge from that house.

I was extremely disappointed to see in the epilogue that the Slytherin house still carried a bad reputation and I was even horrified by Ron's pureblood joke! That comment alone proves that Ron and Hermione could never ever be compatible!!!!!

AS for Hermione playing Quidditch at the beginning of book 6 JKR wrote that she played with Harry, Ginny and Ron so I decided that I could write her playing. She also had to play because it was her idea. I can see her following through on her ideas.

The Auror department needed a total over hall. I haven't thought about interesting the other characters in the department but I guess I will. I find it quite hilarious that you didn't recognize a lot of the names. I got a complaint that I used too many Hogwarts names! LOL

I just had to throw Cho in. How could I not? She's such fun to play with.
 

tard_288
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/07
A very intriguing beginning to this story alayneni. I am very interested. I am slowly making my way through your other stories now. Hmm, it seems Wormtail survived the battle with Voldemort. It is so like him to follow the next biggest bully. Interesting beginning...
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Yes, Wormtail is the type of character that would go with whoever he feels is strongest. He's also the perfect 'tool' to use for any upcoming dark lord! It's a relatiionship that works both ways!
 

hphglover
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/08/07
I like this story so far. It's funny to see how they all like each other, but none of them are together. Hermione is great with the kids. And it has enough mystery and drama to keep you wanting more. I'm adding this to my chapter alerts! Great job!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'm currently working on the next chapter for this story. Your encouragement will make me work harder to get it out quicker.
 

pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 09/08/07
Three Portkey romances, eh?
Well, nothing like a near-death experience to stop taking someone for granted...
The whole Seer thing is intriguing.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I love portkey's couples so I always try to get all three in.
 

pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/08/07
Lol. You've dealt with the small details of children well, like the August-September question.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I don't have any children so it was quite a challenge writing them. I had to picture how I would deal with a child as well as what would a child require. I'm afraid I might end up being an over protective parent.
 

awaltzforanight
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/08/07
i really like your story . i just read the whole thing so far and i cant wait to find out how that serena character is related to hermione. .i hope you keep her occupied with the kids because i think they are so cute. hehe loved the mini draco . great that something is happening between one of our favorite couples. keep up the great work .i totally love changes to but i read in on ff.net since it has more chapter. great work.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I think I tried to reply to your review at ff.net but they don't allow you to reply to anonymous reviews over there. I wanted to tell you that this story was also posted here. Thanks for the review for Changes as well.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/08/07
The story isn't badly written and so on. However, I have no idea what's about. When I read the prologue I thought it was an AU. Then that Quidditch chapter...with people from different houses in ecah team- but then the story is Post HOG. Now, these children.
I'm totally lost here. What's the story? The plot?
Author Feedback: The story is Au. The Quidditch part was a flash back to what happened at Hogwarts. The italics didn't come out when I uploaded it. Sorry.

The story is Post Hogwarts. Part of the stories is the lives of the six and how they relate to each other but there is a sinister plot involving Wormtail, the seers and the Prologue. You'll see at the beginning of the next chapter.
 

Rowena
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/08/07
Ah! Cliffhanger! Why do they always do this to me? Loved this chapter. It's been a while since you updated, so I was so glad when I got this alert. Great job on the chapter and hope that you are coping well with DH.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I'm coping well with DH. Truth is I only read the crapilogue but I will get around to reading the rest of the book eventually. As for taking a while to update, please feel free to pester me for an update.

This recent chapter is the result of a reviewer reminding me that I was taking my time to update again! It might have been longer if not for him/her. Don't worry this story has plenty more to go.
 

Angel 737
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/08/07
Very good! I love the ending to this chapter! The next one should be absolutely great!

Update soon!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. I like the ending as well.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 08/08/07
this story is good...It kept me on my toes...can't wait to see what happens, and keep up the good work!!!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review! I'll try to keep up the good work.
 

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