That was really great. Lovly job. The passion between them was great. Great job.

ok ok ...ill forgive you for the late update with one condition! tell that there is a next chapter hehehe

Both of them going to Ron's house in the middle of the night because of a game: brilliant. Loved it all.

0ooooooo
very good very hot chapter!!!!!!
i loved it alot
update soon!!!!!

Wow hun, another awesome chapter. Very HOT! and you threw in some very sweet moments too. One word: Perfect. I loved it!

Keep the greatness coming!

~Cat

Thanks for the little bit of background information and history that you gave us in the author's note at the beggining, it made the fic that much more enjoyable! If anyone giveS you a bad review, pay no mind. If this is you first try at this type of fic, let me just say that it is great. It has the right amount of angst, fluff, and smut... The story was intresting and the way you wrote all the characters were spot on!

Wow, awesome new chapter!!!

That was a wonderful, hot and sweet love scene! I'd definitely love to read more like this from you!

Very hot, Now I'm just wondering if there is going to be more, and if so, when. Cause this is really well written for a light humor/smut fic, so I'd like to see where you take it. If this is in fact the end, it was a good ride.

DDay

wow. intense. surely it was. update soon! how many chapters are you thinking of doing? Just wondering! good luck, muuuchhh muuuuchh looove!

Well... OK for a first one is good... I like the madness about the presents... the funniest was Ron... hauahua... falling form the bed... ahuahauhau good!! humor is always very good!

WOW! OMG this is really, really good! I love it hun, it's funny and cute, and then we've got the HOTness... this fic has it all, what's NOT to like?! LOL Can't wait for more of it. Keep it coming!

~Cat

Dude, I love this story your starting off very nicely. Keep up the good work.

Hey! OMG this story is soooo f*ckin awesome!!!!! I think the only improvement would be to not stop just when things were getting good, I mean it is rated R for a reason lol. and cliffes are tough for readers but it does seem to get more reviews. Update again soon and until then, byes and Happy Christmas!

That was really cute. There were a couple of typos, but nothing horribly wrong. I thought it was really well-written. I could imagine Ron now yelling and whatnot. That must've been really funny for Luna. Great job.

OH MY GOD!! this line made me laugh so much -
"Hermione screamed joyously as she scrambled to lay her hands upon the present"

haha!! i could just imagine that giddyness!!

continue with this.......its really good, an you make me laugh!