love the story, stly writing is ver interesting and hop u will update very soon

that was an... interesting chapter. don't you think that they're moving a tad to fast?

that was well written. i love your story line. it's awesome

That was a very good chapter. Well thought out and structered

Wow that was just awesome !
I'm at a loss of words.
Keep it up !
Write more fics like these ...

nice chappie, I loved it, just like the previous chappie. you're great with smut

I thought it has ended! But it was good, Not funny like chappter one... hauahuah ofcourse!

Lol very funny. I think you did great for your first rated r story. I think its hilarous about how Harry kept Hermione waiting and waiting. But i thought it was sweet too. Keep writing.

Hey! OH MY! It really is about time for the 2 to make love. I mean anyone can feel the sexual tension between them, even in JK's Books, at least I think so Until the next one, Byes

I love it, it was amazing. ha ha the dancing around each other... Ron, yealling... ha ha I love it
keep it up
can't wait for more
-megz-

that was a really good story for your first time! hopefully there will be more

Ello.. I absolutely love it... anywho, yeah, love it. Thanks for writing!

Hey, I liked this chapter. It's very important that they had made love because now they have nothing to hide from each other and they've seen each other and had each other they're complete now.

i think it is a bit rush to have harry confessed his love for hermione in the very first chapter..
hmmm.. you should keep the first chapter like a sort of intro...
nevertheless, the chapter is very well written..
i'm going to read the second chapter now...

Well goodness gracious, sake's alive! I never knew you had it in ya, snoop! *blushes* ...see you on the forums...