Good story so far. Too bad it appears to be abandoned.

Really great writing although I think you would've had a bit more conflict had you made Ginny jealous also but you still pulled it off nicely.

hi there,
I read all thechapters that youhave putup so far and I think it is an incrediblygood story. You have a very good plot runningthrough and you have kept tothecharacter of the books remarkably well. The romance between hermione and haarry is quite believable, although I don't think that j.k would be that forward in regards to their feelings for each other. She herself seems to like to make harry suffer somewhat I think. however, saying that I still think that this is how she should handle it. perhaps you shouod think of showingher, perhaps e mailing it to her. excellent story once more and look forward to reading the next update.
cheers.

Encore, encore! I like the way you are capturing the thoughts of the characters-and its especially good to see someone detailing Snapes thoughts.

I am truly a patient person BUT this is WAY too long!! Another chapter please unless you have a truly magnificent reason (and we readers would want to know what it is) so please, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

i love it is was so good!! i like how Ron sees them kissing knowing that he'll have to deal with it and realize hermione and harry are in love!!!

i love your story. Why haven't you posted for a long time? Can you send me a complete copy of this story?

Are you going to update this anytime soon? Or is the writers block somewhat severe?

Incredible ! I it ! I've just finished reading your story and I'm amazed by the power of it. You write extremely well and your words are strong and true. I really do hope that you will continue this story. It's worth it. Congratulations for your remarkable work and keep writing please!

Yo have a wonderful way with words. It's a real pleasure to read your work. please keep on writing. Thanks.

That chapter kicked so much @$$! I love it. This is one of the better confetions of love between these two that I've ever read. Sweet, ok off to read more.

Awww. This story is really good, and I love to read it... But this 'reading about adorable couples when you personally are desperately bitter about being alone on the day before Valentine's day' thing... yeah. That sucks. But I'm projecting, so sorry. And yeah. Still love the story, and I probably still will when I'm ninety-five, and still alone, and I'm reminiscing about the "good old days."

"Love it! Hated it! Let me know!" Psshh, as if anyone could actually hate this story. I LURVVVVE it!

truly great story so far. I absolutely love the depth of the emotions you give your characters. The way you describe every scene brings the characters and you can feel each of their own emotions raging through your own body. I don't know if other people get this feeling but that's how I felt when I was reading this story. Hope that the rest of the story will be just as good as the first two chapters have been so far. Truly great work!

I LOVE IT PLEEASE TRY TO HURRY