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Sweet. Ever so sweet. Awfully, achingly sweet.
My, did this make me smile.
I loved the one line ending and I loved the bit when his smell came into play.
Wonderful.
Lovely.
Sweet. |
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Aww, what a sweet little ficlet! After I read Bewitched, I had to come read some of your other stories. This one was adorable. The image of Hermione flinging herself at Harry is always fluffy.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/07
I AM looking forard to read more of Bewiched
I love it it's my favorite and so is bed Clothes.
it's the best two story on the net.
i can't whit for chapter 7.
please update.  Longfletch you rock.
 it's time for me to end this comment.
Tha tha that's all floks! so long for now.
good night. Cut! FADE OUT TO BLACK! |
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that was good!!!!!!!! i especially loved the story 'Bewitched'...but i should review there, shouldnt i?  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/06
That was cute and short. Great job. Lovely  . Very nice |
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Loved the story, a little short, okay a lot short ... but then maybe it was just the right length too.
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Author Feedback: It's super fluff in 399 words.  Thank you a lot! Are you stalking my stories? I've seen quite a bit of you. It's not like I mind, concrit and reviews are always welcome. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/06
Love it. Short, sweet and to the point. Good job.
~Cat |
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oh...that was so cute
i wish it was longer cause it was really cool! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/06
that was very good, quite strait and... well... dunno what to say! twas a bit short, though |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/06
 CUTE! VERY CUTE!
man! i would kill to have woken up just how hermione did! well, i think i do!wouldn't anyone want to wake up having that special someone there right next to you in bed.....
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/12/06
Bewithched and this story is my Favorite and so is sacand Chanse.
I just love your story's please keep it up.
I have to get some thng to eat now ut i will be back to re read you story agin.
But in litt then.
Tha tha that's all floks.
In put cartoon muic.
Sorry my spelling is off. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/06
Oh, I just love H/Hr ficlets! This was a good one. Hermione missing her love. I love how she wore his pjs and his smell made her miss him all the more. *sigh* |
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JanusSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/06
I really enjoyed reading this! Hermione's nightly routine was cutely funny--especially her thoughts on "stealing" Harry's favorite pajama pants.
But I think I enjoyed the ending the best, I couldn't get the image of Hermione jumping out of the bed and down the stairs out of my head.
Anways, great job on this!  I hope to read more from you. |
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I absolutely loved that!
I loved how sweet it was, despite the fact that Harry didn't make an appearance until the very end.
I loved the way she was thinking about the pajama pants and the shirt and all...
It would be nice if there was a sequel... perhaps about what MORE happened once Harry got home ;-)
Anyhow, I loved this fic! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I'm utterly hopeless with those type of fics, although I love to read 'em. I'm so horrible. |
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That was great! *Knows exactly how Hermione felt* And the reaction to when Harry got home was priceless. Great job!  |
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