AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
lmaooooo omgg i LOVEDDDDD the story!!! it was so funny and cute...fantastic!!  |
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Very sweet and fluffy but I think the telling-they-loved-each-other was rushed. They could just been flustered...and then you would have more reason to continue! Very sweet story! |
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Miss MadyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
Aww, Hobbes, that was wonderful! I loved the last lines...:
“How much of this was an accident?”
“Will you look at how late it is? It's nearly time for lunch; I think I'll go make some.” Harry quickly moved from underneath her and trotted out of the door.
She followed him, shouting, “Harry, you get back here! I demand answers!”
lol-- Great job, Hobbes! I'll always be a big fan of you and your works!
Miss Mady
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Author Feedback: Miss Mady, you flatter me immensly. Thank you for being so supportive! |
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*giggles* I loved this, it was definitely very sweet.
Short but sweet  - It's sometimes the best kind.
I loved this little fic!
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! All of my one-shots are super short, but I can never manage a drabble for some reason. Weird. |
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SarahUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
Hey great storie, haha the last part was funny from harry walking away what was that all about. |
Author Feedback: Let's just say Harry didn't forget that Hermione was there.  Thanks! |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
that was a very good little one shot. Very sweet Keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm trying on that last part. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
Cute! I love how Hermione forgot where she was and Harry climbing into bed during the night. They just can't stay away from each other! Nice fic! |
Author Feedback: Cheeky devils. Thanks a lot! |
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ha!this ending was just perfect!I loved the way you wrote Hermione!
is this really one-shot?cause I would be happy if you continued...think about it |
Author Feedback: I love writing Hermione. She always has this air of being more than she seems in the books. You can add to her character. Thanks! |
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HAHAHAHHA... I demand answers as well!
How beautiful of you to write such a story. I mean, it's not every day that a girl wakes up in her best friend's arm and discovers that they are in love...
You gonna continue?
My best,
Sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: I think that's it for this one. It's flattering, though, to ask for more. Thanks muchly! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
That was really great. I loved it. Great job...Lovely...Loveyly! How cute that Harry ran out. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
great start. cant wait so find out what happens next. |
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A cite scene, but a little abrupt on the declarations of love. It would be better with more buildup... |
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HAHA I loved that! And the ending was the best part LOL Harry is not the best liar in the world. *laughs and wonders what punishment Hermione will bestow on him for this one* haha Anyway, great story |
Author Feedback: He's a good liar...when the need arises. Then was not one of those times. I like to think that she banished him to the couch for the night...and then gave in later on that night. |
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Short, sweet, and fluffy. There is certainly nothing wrong with that, my dear. Especially at Christmas! |
Author Feedback: I was thinking of writing something for Christmas especially. Harry rushing to get a gift comes to mind... |
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ScoutSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/06
I likee! It was very sweet and cute! I love H/Hr fluff!!! Write more soon! |
Author Feedback: Fluff makes the world go 'round sometimes. Thanks a lot! |
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