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That was such an adorable chapter. I particularly enjoyed this:
“How much of this was an accident?”
“Will you look at how late it is? It's nearly time for lunch; I think I'll go make some.”
Too cute, honestly. It really made me 'squee'. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/07
I just never get tired of rereading this story. Great job. I hope to read more of your stories. |
Author Feedback: Wow, you've read this more than once? I take that as a high compliment. Thanks for (re)reading! |
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Ha. I wish that you would consider doing a second chapter to this story. You could really build a good multi-chaptered fic from this.
In case it wasn't apparent...I loved this one. Bravo.  |
Author Feedback: Sorry I haven't replied until now, but thanks a lot! Maybe one day if I get the creative urge, I'll give it a go. No promises though since my muse likes to slack off.  |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/04/07
Lol that was awesome.
The ending was just superb !
Can't believe this was your first fic. |
Author Feedback: Thanks a lot! Yeah, it was close to being my first fic. About my third, actually. But there are tons of better writers than me on here. Absolutely better writers. But thank you again! Also, sorry for not replying until now! |
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That was really cute. I tend to stick to fics set at Hogwars. But I really enjoyed this one. Great fic! |
Author Feedback: Well, I'm glad to see you took a chance on this. Thanks for reading (and reviewing) it! And sorry I didn't reply until now, but PK decided not to send me any notifications. *shifty eyes* |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/07
aaawwww  I swear, I'm falling in love with your writing style. Loved it. |
Author Feedback: Late, late reply. Sorry on that. But thanks for reviewing! |
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HUAHUAHUAH... never stop with the bossyness ahuahau “Harry, you get back here! I demand answers!”
I think I can nearly hear she screaming!! |
Author Feedback: Late reply, I know. Sorry about that. But thank you for reviewing anyway. And yeah, I can hear Hermione screaming too. |
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aahahaha! omg! that's so cute! i liked it really short one-shot, it made me giggle, and i love how calm harry was! good job! i wouldnt change anything in it |
Author Feedback: I know this reply is soooo late (my apologizes), but I wanted to thank you. Apparently, PK doesn't want to send me review notices. *shifty eyes at PK* Thanks! |
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To be Frank, I think there should have been another thousand words between falling out of bed and the 'I love you's'. Some flustered miscommunication could have tweaked it nicely.
But then my name's Barmy not Frank ...
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Author Feedback: LOL to that last part. Thank you for the concrit. I have a habit of rushing things in my stories. I'm just so ready to get to the H/Hr goodness that I hurry up. I kinda saw it in my head as Harry coming up with his plan on purpose and just going in there and telling her. Maybe I could write another from his point of view. Hmmm... |
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Sweet fic. I'm looking forward to your next fic. Have a happy time writing! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Well, I'm really working on Bewitched and I'm probably going to be putting some more stuff up soon so there's some to look forward to. I have a whole bunch of fics, maybe I have too much fun writing. |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/12/06
Very cute. I love it. I can just picture an annoyed Hermione following Harry into the kitchen! |
Author Feedback: "Answer me now, Potter!"
"I love you."
"I lo...hey wait, don't change the subject!"
Yeah, Harry has some explaining to do. Thanks! |
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Author Feedback: Your welcome, I guess. Thanks for the nice review! |
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gl1346Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/06
Pretty cute, but I don't think it's a "G". More of a PG13 for insinuation, even though nothing happens. Just something to keep in mind. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I did up the rating. I was in such a happy state at finally being able to write here, I didn't even look at the rating. Oops. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
*G* That was adorable! I loved how she got embarressed. *G*
Lisa |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Gotta love the Hermione embarrassed phase considering we don't see it often. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/06
Aw, that ending was cute! The whole fic was cute. I really liked it. Good job! |
Author Feedback: Cute is hard to pace, that's for sure. Thanks a lot! |
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