tobydogSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/12/06
Thanks for a great story. You're a lovely addition to Portkey! Hope to see much more of you. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/12/06
It was a great story. Yay! Well, I'm glad that all of them are super happy. Great job. Lovely. I loved it. Hermione isn't such an idiot afterall. Glad to see that all the couples are good. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/12/06
Well, Hermione is an idiot. A huge idiot. Great job on continuing this. I remember I reviewed, or whatever. Anyways..this was a really great chapter. Wow...I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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 Awwwwww! I loved Draco in this one! Harry is just so sweet... YAY!
The story may have been short; but what is important within fanfiction is the the quality, not the lenght. And I thought that this was very good quality.
“Who's the happiest?” asked Hermione in confusion.
“Malfoy because the Weasley clan still doesn't know where he is.”
 Loved it! Congrats! |
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that was really really cute, incredibly cheesy, but really cute. AHHH, if only real life ended like that, then maybe there wouldn't be any wars, and fighting, and evil at all, just happiness |
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Miss MadyUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
AWWWWW-- how fluffy! I lurve Malfoy! This made my day even better... did you hear about the 7th book's title?
Miss Mady |
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Mage_13Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
Oh, this one was great!!
Most unexpected with the littlw twist at the end, but really good!!
Keep it up and update soon!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
Short and sweet, but very good. I loved the ending. Go Malfoy at being the stubborn git he always is. He does the things no one else has the stones to do. I like how you portrayed Ginny as well, definately the more stuckup Ginny but also the one with potential. |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
Short and sweet, but very good. I loved the ending. Go Malfoy at being the stubborn git he always is. He does the things no one else has the stones to do. I like how you portrayed Ginny as well, definately the more stuckup Ginny but also the one with potential. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
Way too neat, way too pat an ending for the angsty setup you established. Sorry - that's just the way I felt about it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/12/06
now that was a good story! good, job, seriously. when i read the end of the second chapter i felt tears comming to my eyes! and this one ended it good! as soon as malfoy said, "your about to find out." I gasped and was like, "omg! its ginny! ginnys gonna leave harry for malfoy! omg!!" lol. good job..write more good stories! muucchhh muccchhhh llooovveee! |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/12/06
Very raw, very emotional and just overall a good start. The absolute anguish she went through after he left was so powerful. I am definately eager to see where this story leads please don't keep us hanging for too long. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I just felt like she was getting her heart ripped away from her and he was too. It's always hard to write chapters like this, it makes me sad and want to write fluff. |
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