I was wonder... How many left chapter THAT you finish with story of Baby Problems?  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 01/02/07
cute! Love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. Are they going to hae children???? |
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Author Feedback: Lol, the story isn't over yet, there is many more chapters to come so don't worry  |
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They were happy and in love, nothing could beat this feeling that they both shared. Is this a way of telling us that something bad will happen or is it a happy ending? I hope it's the last one. Please update as soon as you can. |
Author Feedback: Well you will have to wait and see Anyway i will update soon Thank you for reading and of course for the review |
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lauhallUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 31/01/07
OMG, Totally loved it, you are doing an excelent job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please, pretty please post more soon |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much and i will update more soon, probably in a few days |
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The bit with Hedwig was very cute. Thanks for the fic, it's delightfully fluffy.
Feel free to have Harry kick Adam's ass again (no sectumpsempra or unforgivables)...though Hermione kicking his ass would be even more fun (she's no shrinking violet).
My only complaint is that Luna isn't nearly spacy enough, but she's a hard character to get a lock on. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for reading and for the review, now i agree Luna isn't easy and i also think that she can have her dreamy self but also grown up a little, i think she would have matured a little after everything.And yeah the part with Hedwig was very cool to do, different too
Once again thank you for reading and taking the time to review |
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Finally!!! I have been waiting for this! Mione is going to have babies! yeah!
great chapter!that letter was so sweet! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much, i'm really glad that you enjoyed and i will update more probably around the weekend |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 31/01/07
Oh love it, sick at home from work and started reading and could not stop. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for reading, i'm really happy that you are enjoying also get well soon |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 31/01/07
You seem to be having a few problems with tense and punctuation -- going from present to past, and leaving out many, many commas and periods.
As for your depiction of Hermione, I can't believe that she'd ever be as dense as you've portrayed her to be with the letter. She's the brightest witch of her age, you must remember. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the comment i really suck at grammar and hate it, now about Hermione lets not forget that she keept in mind the talk that she and Harry shared where he said he loved someone but that person was taken, having that in mind she would never think it was her also she was so taken with the emotion and feelings she found out on the letter that she didn't thought |
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This is such a great story. I love how Harry & Ron act like the older brothers to protech Hermione even though she can do it herself. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, Ron see her like a baby sister and Harry well he loves her and wouldn't let anyone hurt her even if both know that she could kick his sorry arse
Thanks for reading and for the review |
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Yay! I love this story. I'm glad that Harry and Hermione finally realize their feelings for one another.. and have shared them! This story is very well written and I look forward to reading more. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much, i'm really glad that you are enjoying this story so much, it means alot and thank you for the review |
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Author Feedback: Thank you so much, yeah the part with Hedwig was really funny to write, i will update soon probably around the weekend and once again thank you |
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... wow. i have to admit i'm alittle surprised at how easily Harry came out to say that it was her...
but i ove it
i can't wait for more
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: He came out so easily because she did indeed read the letter so she already knew her feelings but she thought he liked someone else, also the poor guy have been controlling himself to not tell her why not get the chance when its there?
Glad you enjoyed |
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Author Feedback: Thank you, i really enjoyed that part too, it was different and cute
Thank you for reading and for the review |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 30/01/07
this story is really good. is it going to continue?? it's AWESOME!! |
Author Feedback: Yes it will and thank you for reading |
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