Hmmm - sounds like Ron deserved to die. So what's the problem? Oh well... I can guess. For how long has Ron been known to be a traitor, and who knows?

Ron?!?! Oh my goodness gracious!!! What is going on! I'm very confused!! But I'll wait for all to be revealed! I hope to see a new chapter soon!

Until then! bye

What is going on?!?!? I have no clue and yet I'm still interested!! Hahahahahah I'm guessing that's Voldemort? But why would Voldemort call Hermione by her name?? Mmmmmm Me wonders!!

I'm heading to chapter 3!!

This first chapter looks very interesting, it called my attention! I’m not sure what’s going on but I'm off to chapter 2!!

Bye

RON?!! IT WAS RON?!!! Oops sorry about the last review, guess i was rong.

OMG it's Voldemort! well, to you Voldy! sic 'im Harry. That's right, show no mercy! Mwahahahahah!! Sorry I get that way sometimes.

oh. my. god. i trust you to reveale everythin but i swear ill go crazii if i dont do it soon! lol. im soo CONFUSED!! but w/e. i know youll clear it up. Ron? idk. idk. i have noooo idea! but its great...and ii know it will continue to be! mmuuuchchh muuuchh loooove

oh no she didn't kill ron... good try though you almost had me

interesting start. I hope to see an update from you soon.
Happy Holidays

hmmm... well it's well written but the chapters are too short, even combining the first and second they would be a bit short. I find that they should be at least about 4 pages in length. But otherwise it's quite good, I look forward to reading what happens next.

i like the way you write but i cant really tell wat the plot your storys about..neways update soon!

It isn't bad- just a little confused and way too short!
Maybe you should post more chapters to show the readers what this story is about or make the chapter longer with a little more details.

Like chapter 1 and 2 could be only one chapter.

Hmmm pretty interesting.
Keep it up, I can´t wait for what will happen next.