Well A nice start and i hope you get to more as we go along.
I also want to see you write about their time in school in a Multi-chaptered story.

Its easier to write about them 'after' Voldy-Kins gets fried!

dennisud

oh wells that's sweet! Harry and Hermione ARE sweet though aren't they? the almost perfect couple?

very gud job. but plz write a little longer chapters if u update after such big intervals. plz b fair n update 's soon 's possible.

how sweet.... . please update 's soon 's possible 4 u. pleeeaaase.....

hey thats not fair. I think that you should definately update this story more often

The only thing I don't like is How innocent Hermiones attitude is. she really should get a grip. Keep up the good work.

ow!Harry is just sooo sweet!
I really cannot wait for the next chapter!
i love the way you write...
am going to check out you other stories
see ya

I hope Hermione gets to her senses soon. Really soon. Harry is all set, but she... You know, I find that for her to be so insecure regarding Harry is a little strange... Afterall, she has known the man for over seven years.

Anyhow, it's a different beginning and I like it very much. Update soon!

This is a great start. Keep going; this story has great potential

Aww this story is so cute! Update as soon as you get a chance! I can't wait to find out what else is goning to happen!

b o r i n g ....... need more action.

I`m looking forward to the swimmingpart thats always nice to read about. But I`m wondering what`s that with the secret.

Thanks for the storie, it begins with great interest. Nicely written why does hermione always doubt her capabilities.

It's a Cute story.
It's not what I sapected.
And I am sorry but i don't realy have some thing to say here.
Only a cartoon ending.
So here it go's.
Tha tha that's all floks.

Great start! I hope you post the next chapter quickly, because I'm anxious to see where this story goes and what kind of vacation they are going to have. Good job!