Hey there! If you're still looking for a beta, I'll be happy to volunteer... I'm currently one of the beta's for TheScribbler's Vox Corporis: Rebirth, and have done quite a bit of other editing/beta work for other writers online over the years.

As for opinions on how to end the story... well... that I haven't been able to make up in my own mind yet -- but as soon as I come up with some I'll be glad to let you know!

Besides that one more thing -- bravo, well done!

I was just reading this again. I think you could totally extend this. I mean....Harry is truly hurt and I don't think he should get over that so easily. He seems to be in a really low and dark place and his "friends" really weren't there for him. So, I don't think he should be in a very forgiving mood for a while. I actually think that Harry should grow closer to Luna and find a kinship with her. Have Ron and especially Hermione believe that something is going on with Harry/Luna (maybe there is something there for a while). Then, she can see how Harry's felt for so long as well. I really think Harry should have a nice relationship before even thinking of being with Hermione. Hermione needs to realize what she is taking for granted. I don't believe that Harry/Hermione should be together right now. It will look too much like pity on Hermione's part. Harry deserves better. So, for a while I would love to see Harry with Luna learning to care about someone and have them truly care about him back. She could help him come to terms with his feelings regarding the deaths around him and what he's facing. I really don't think either Ron nor Hermione are good for him right now. Ugh...just the thought of r/hr together is enough to remind me what I had for breakfast.

Honestly, I believe that Harry/Hermione shouldn't get together for a while. Harry has to experience life a bit prior to that. Also, it shouldn't be made easy for Hermione either. Harry isn't a project for her to study or a problem for her to fix. He isn't a charity case. Therefore, she should come up against a stronger Harry and one that has found his identity and has a stability about him. So, she should have to really work to convince Harry of her feelings.

Just a few thoughts.

pl.do complete it, it is something that u should finish......

-sally

why does the 6th chapter have too be the last? i don't think that it should be. i think you should right for an eternity *evil laugh*. jk, but it is really good. great job. no more tears though, but that might be b/c i'm in a fight with my friend and am extremely angry. well, 5, 10, 15 more chapters? lol a sequel? great job once again.

oh no... * screams * i love harry. DAMN you ron. You couldn't keep your effin mouth shut!!!! *cries* now i have to go get another box of tissues. but great job.

oh yep i'm still crying. this is amazing some real J.k. stuff. better actually and i'm serious.

omg i didn't even cry for the seventh book but i cried the whole time. omg. i can't even see the screen, but you did great. *sob*

Great story, and could find nothing to critisize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon.

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I am enjoying your work and hope you are not going to stop any time soon.
Thanks, Old Chuck

Well, I'm glad that you have posted this note, I sortoa forgot about this story. I get so involved in other stories, that I forget what ones I am and am not reading. And what ones I have read, and then re-read..ti's great. Especially when I get really busy with school and stuff.

Well good luck with your writer's block and I hope that you can get your mind off of it and be able to have a clear mind and all that good stuff.

Well, I hope you writer's block will be over soon, because I really want to know how you plan to finish this story.
Sakura_txell

I have to agree with the other review. Hermione doesn't seem like she's really went through anything enough for her to really deserve Harry. She criticizes Ron over his unconcern for Harry yet, up until reading the letter about his death march, she showed every bit of disregard for Harry's feelings as Ron did even going as far as to sneak around behind his back about it (Even though Harry actually already knew about it).

I think Harry getting together with another girl (Seems like Luna would fit the role well) would really open Hermione's eyes to how she feels not to mention about how Harry felt in her position.

I really like the story so I hope you get past your block. Good luck.

O/c i'll be paitent! I'll admit i was upset when it said authors note, but hey, who wouldnt be? i'll wait as long as you need to for this next chpater and still read it. I saw Operation CoJacks, but didnt read it, but i havent seen that other one, mayb i should chek it out?! yah. okay. lol, have fun! good luck! MML!(i recently shortened my famous saying of 'muuchh muuchh loove!' to MML!, much shorter n easier. ha)

Personally I don’t want to see them get together in this fic. Maybe Hermione didn’t love Ron and him her but to suddenly just up and decide to break up is just stupid. As for Harry, he was planning to kill himself, why is eh still alive? If anything now that you-know-who is D.Y.E, should be easier for him. IMO Harry should run away/kill himself. It doesn’t feel as if he has reached a point where he’s ready to live.

Well, after reading CoJacks, I went and read this... The Letters... and yes, it was very agnsty, yet it was pretty pretty good, some bits where truly in-character (ron and his fears) and some off-character (hermione acting without being bossy, letting herself being overriden by ron...) all in all, a pretty good fanfiction, and like in cojacks, please do update this as soon as possible!