usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/06
This was very interesting. I thought it was great for being so dark and a vampire fic. Very ncie |
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Wow.
I'm actually...Wow.
That was so dark, and...and, bloody. 
But no, seriously. Great job. I've never readd anything as dark as this, and I think it's fantastic.
You should write more. 
-toinkydoink |
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Mmhmm, it is very dark and... slightly bloody 
I'm really glad that you liked it though!
Thanks for reviewing!
-Michelle |
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jessie179Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
I love dark fics and vampires. Now put them together with Harry and Hermione and you get a rather unique and interesting one-shot.  |
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-Michelle |
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Me loves some vampires. It was a well written fic. I liked the language you decided to use. Great Work! |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
I love vampires as well, so that's where this came from
I"m glad you liked the language!
And thanks for reviewing!
-Michelle |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
Well the orange link color on the new/updated page kinda gave away who they were too... lol.
Great one shot tho. |
Author Feedback:
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
Mmhmm, yup, the orange link was a dead giveaway... I actually wrote that A/N originally for FF.net, I suppose I could have changed it up a little before posting on Portkey, but it doesn't make much of a difference.
Thanks for reviewing!
-Michelle |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
dude u make them sound like they were vampires or something. |
Author Feedback: They ARE vampires  |
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Awesome and absolutely hot one-shot!!!
You did a great job at describing their passions and the urgent need.
I'd love to read more from you! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Thank you!
I'm so glad you liked it!
And thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
-Michelle |
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i love vampire fics of harry and hermione. can't get any hotter or darker. this was no exception.
fucking hot. fucking loved it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you loved it!
-Michelle |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
Could this possibly be part of a bigger story about how they came to be this way, or are you leaving it as is? Good story, I agree the Harry hints about the legendary scar are more obvious than her wild brown hair, anyway great job. |
Author Feedback: Hmm... well I never originally thought of it as a part of a bigger story. I just started typing one night and this is what came out of it, so I always just thought of leaving it as is. Technically, I could eventually write a novel-length story that fits around this fic, and I'd actually like to now that I think about it, but I sincerely doubt that I'll ever find the time.
Either way, thank you very much for the review! I'm glad you liked the story!
-Michelle |
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I think it's kind of sweet yet erotic. I like the way you used the old English or whatever it is that you used (I never took literature!). |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
Yeah, it was kind of medieval type English - but to tell you the truth, I don't know any more about it aside from what it sounds like *blush*
I just thought it was fitting for the slightly dark, vampire type theme.
Thanks for the review!
-Michelle |
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/06
Hmmm... yea it is a bit dark but very sexy! I haven't read a vampire fic in a while, it was refreshing. |
Author Feedback: Good to know
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the fic!
-Michelle |
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