RinnbakuSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/08
I think that the 'Hermione hints', as you called them, were easy to find. Starting with the orange colored title!! Though it would be harder to guess on other sites, I bet.
How old are they? Is this after canon, or completely AU? Sorry, I'm a bit of a stickler for timelines...
Again, good lemon. You're an expert at doing it right. Too many people write like it's a cheap Hentai movie, dialogue and all... Gets annoying, really.
How did Harry convince her to wear THAT, even in private? Or was it in private... you didn't write about other people, but didn't actually say where they were. My initial impression was that they were at a club or a party, but then they just got into it... Sorry, I can't really imagine 'Mione as an exhibitionist...
TTFN
Rinn ^_^ |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/02/08
That was absoulutely...WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW! I love your writing sssooo much. I\'m not exagarating it was absoulutely gorgeus!!!!!  |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/09/07
Wow.  Nicely done.  With smut and all. Harry and Hermione vampire sex must be more hotter than human sex.  Love the theme! Love the story!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/07/07
damn you're good. you should write a book or something. amazing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/04/07
omg wow...i dont even know how many times i have read this its so awesome |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/04/07
that was so awesome! you should seriously do more like it! spectacular! (and i love your useage of words) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/07
that was so great...just amazing. you should totally be a writer of this sort of things. it rocked. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! It's really reviews like this that inspire me to try and move forward in my writing!
I really appreciate it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/03/07
seductive, i really liked the way you made them vampires. I have a vampire fetish so this was really inticing. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! |
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I have never read this kind of mix...like HP and Vampires
but it turned out to be great...really!
great job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much!
There's actually another story here on Portkey (quite a long one, actually) that involves HP and Vampires.
It's called Forever Knight if you're interested - it's a magnificent story, in my opinion. |
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Free28Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/07
Great story. I liked it. I am writing a sotry too and was wondering if I could use some of your ideas in my story. Email me and we can work it out if its alright with you.great story |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
I don't have your e-mail, but anyhow, I'd rather that you didn't use my exact ideas. You could do something similar, as long as you change it and make it your own.
Thanks for reviewing though, I appreciate it! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/07
oh i didnt know they were vampires i thought it was just kinky lol well good story nonetheless too dark for m though |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing...
There were mentions of fangs, so I thought it would've gotten it across that they were vampires  |
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well I really love vampires... since I'm... I'm alive hauahauhau... really, but mixing vampires with HP's world... don't know... it isn't bad, it's just diferent... never saw it!!
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Author Feedback: There's actually a magnificent story called Forever Knight, here on Portkey, which involves vampires, and Hermione actually becoming one... vampires and HP have been done, just not too commonly.
Thank you for the review! |
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Muhahahaha I am in love with this! You should write more with your vampire Harry and Hermione...I strongly encourage it! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I think I'm definitely going to consider doing something more with the two of them. |
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Oh this is wonderful, just brilliant. I love the vamp fics now, Forever Knight got me into the whole Vamp!Harry and Vamp!Hermione thing. Really great job, I thought you made it pretty clear it was Harry and Hermione. Their conversation toward the end was awesome, kudos to you. Hope you write more like this!!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you so very much!
I also read Forever Knight, and I agree with that getting me into the whole Vamp!HHr deal.
I'm really glad that you liked the story, and I'm glad you liked their conversation.
Thank you very much for reviewing, I really appreciate it. |
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I love it, you have mystery in there and it's wonderful the imagry the details, the writing, you add in some details but don't elaborate too much, ending up in trailing away from the story.
you're a good author
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you liked the way in which the story was written.
And it also means a lot to me knowing that you think I am a good author.
Thanks for the review!
-Michelle |
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