RinnbakuSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/08
That was hot. Only way to describe it. I like how you didn't make the lemony part obscene or overly graphic. It's so much better that way *nods repeatedly*
On a side note, why did you use Lavender, Parvati, and Ginny for the tormentors? I can see the idea that they're closer to her, and that makes it more painful, but I know they were at least girlfriends in canon... I dunno, it's just kinda (read: really) OOC to me. I've read all these fics where they're her closest friends (besides the Trio), so it's a little hard to swallow.
Anyway, good fic! Gonna go check out the rest of your stuff now... *shakes your hand, jogs off to keyboard...*
TTFN
Rinn ^_^ |
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CandraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/08
I read this story at Fanfiction.net (I'm ZivaJade there) and loved it. I'm reviewing it here again, because I want to have all my favourite Harry/Hermione stories in one list here at Portkey and yours has to be in the list, it's so great!  Harry is really sweet in your story, I love the way he treats Hermione. He is so gentle and takes things slow to avoid scaring her. Very sweet and very sensual.  |
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/09/07
That was lovely.  Ginny, Pavarti and Lavender are such bitches for manipulating Hermione.  Made me kind of angry for the sorry wenches but the anger soon cleared when Harry made her feel beautiful.  Fantastic story! I love it! |
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love the story, stly writing is ver interesting and hop u will update very soon |
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DrakeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/05/07
Woot! Very hot, thought Harry could have used a bit more confidence in himself! I'm kind of wishing someone would write one of these where Hermione really is ugly/overweight, though. |
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I don't know how or why I missed your story. This was so beautiful. I was captivated by how well you took us through their first time. The way Harry took the time to show her how beautiful she was just brought tears to my eyes. I loved the story and its' meaning. Beautiful, just beautiful. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so so much! I don't think I could thank you enough! I'm so glad that you liked the story, and it really means a lot to me to hear it!
I really appreciate that you took the time to write this review, thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/07
I loved this soooo much. this story was absolutely amazing!. i have some body issues of my own & i could definetly relate to the feelings that you made Hermione have in the story since i feel like that alot sometimes . i really do hope you write a sequel to it. That would be awesome.
Cant wait to hear more of your stories!
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Author Feedback: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and I could relate to it myself, which is why it meant so much to me to write this story.
I'm fairly sure that I will write a sequel to it eventually, but I've not much idea of when I be able to get around to doing that.
Thank you so much again! Reviews like yours really inspire me! |
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THIS WASA REALLY GOOD ONE-SHOT I LOVED IT. IT REALLY TIES INTO THE EMOTIONS OF THE AVERAGE GIRL. REALLY GOOD WRITING. ANYWAY GREAT STORY, KEEP ON WRITING!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so so very much! I was really going for that, so I'm glad that it came across the way I wanted it to. |
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That was an amazing story! It was so romantic and not sloppy romantic just realistic. We could all use a Harry. I totally agree with whoever wrote the challenge. Average size girls are BEAUTIFUL no matter what anyone says. They're obviously just jealous. Keep Writing! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so so much! 
And we could all use a Harry.
Immediately after I read the challenge, I knew I wanted to write the fic, because I felt so strongly about showing that average sized girls are beautiful - more so that those who feel the need to starve themselves for 'beauty'
Thank you again! |
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Brilliant, I just loved this story. I think the way Harry...ahem...handled Hermiones insecurities was beautiful and loving. Well Done! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so very much!
Harry did *ahem* HANDLE it well, didn't he? 
I"m really glad that it came across as being that way.
Thank you again, I really appreciate that you took the time to write this review! |
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glitterSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/07
I know I'm very late; but I wanted tyo le ou know how much I enjoyed ths fic. It was great; you have an awesome way of showing hte characters' personalities like srystal; I love that.
You know what would be a great idea? if you wrote a second chapter in which harry has a few nice words with Lavender, ginny, and parvati. Just a suggestion
Continue writing... you can grow very big if you keep this up. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for this review and for your praise!
Others have also asked for a sequel or for a second chapter, and I think I will, in fact, end up writing it - I only don't know when... mostly likely once I'm finished with the story I'm currently working on, and the one's that I'm planning.
Thank you again for this! It means a lot to me knowing that you enjoyed this story! |
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That was amazing! I think you did a fantastic job of showing Hermione and all of the insecurities we all have. The love you had Harry show towards her was perfect. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for the kind words!
The reason I particularly wanted to write this story was because it hit so close to home, and I knew that there were many people (including myself) that would be able to relate to it. I really wanted to prove the point to myself as much as to any other person, that one doesn't have to be thin to be beautiful, and I really wanted to show the extent of Hermione's insecurities in order to get that point across.
Thank you for the review, it means a lot to me hearing that you liked the story. |
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that was absolutely beautiful. Harry is such a caring and gentle boyfriend. Hermione is mad to think she is not beautiful. Fortunately, she has Harry to convince her |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much. Yes, I really wanted Harry to come across as being very caring and gentle - he has been Hermione's best friend since they were 11 years old, after all. |
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I always want to thank the authors for taking the time to make my day better. This was a very good story and I am glad I came across it. |
Author Feedback: A review like this is all I need to inspire me to write more. Thank YOU! |
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This was good. The balance (in lenght) between Hermiones thougts alone and the dialoge is very good. The dialoge itselfe is "real" and beliveble. The story is slow enough to be interesting yet fast enough to not be boring. Overall a A+ fic.
Christoffer |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for this review. It's really good to hear that you think there is a good balance, because I worried a bit that it would end up seeming as though there were far too many thoughts and not enough dialogue.
I really appreciate that you took the time to write this review, because it means a lot to me to be reading such praise.
Thank you again! |
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