Good job so far. Its gone well with all thats happened from the last book.

Really enjoyed this. Especially the moment Hermione came to Ron's room to find him. That was a very nice moment for the two of them. And of course the dance was lovely, and the ending of the chapter was excellent. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work!

~Cat

o my god..... i loved it.
it was soo cute. wanna read more
it's good so write the next one soon.

Great start! Poor Harry, he's been through so much and lost too many people. I would be numb as well. Yeah for Mature!Ron. I can't wait to see what develops between Harry and Hermione.

Wow! You are off to a fantastic start! I love the final scene, it was so sweet and peaceful. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Great job!

Quite good begining.

I can't wait to read more and see how the relationship develop and how much the friendship with Ron will survive.

I like this so far and it's starting to get really interesting.

okay i rally liked this chapter... i loved how you handled the whole ron and hermione thing.. i hope you continue it because i would like to se where this story goes.. keepw riting

so far so good. looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon.

Um, it seems good- just, please don't get me wrong- a little too fast. In the begining he was feeling ¨nothing¨ then he was snogging Hermione.

And the POV's...I was confused when it was Harry's POV but then suddenly turned to Hermione's feelings/thought...in the same paragraph.


Oh, and Ron's memories- it should be better if you put them in italics.

Other than that the story is good so far.

Waiting for the next chapter

Nice, I liked the little Ron/Hermione interlude from HBP that you had in there to show what they were both feeling at the time, and how he came to accept her decision. Great start, keep it up.

Great fic! Very well done, and I long to read more of it.

Please update soon.