gidge_8Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 30/04/08
Wow. Love dragons. Love adventure. Love the story. Thanks for writing such a wonderfully interesting adventure.
I do have one minor nit that I noticed along the story, if I may. Just the spelling/usage of the word bare/bear:
bear - as in to bear a burden, I can't bear it, etc.
bare - to expose, or to uncover
Many writers seem to get these mixed up.
Thanks again for a wonderful story.
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Author Feedback: Oh gosh, I am truly surprised you liked it. I read it the other day to refresh my mind since I wanted to work on the sequel again, and I was cringing the whole way. It really was filled with so many typos and grammatical errors, not to mention the writing itself was not spectacular.
But, if you liked it I shouldn't complain, lol. I can promise you the sequel will be much better. |
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gidge_8Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 29/04/08
This story is wonderful. I love the fantasy aspect of the forbidden forest, with strange mysteries to be overcome. Very creative! Very fun to read. |
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it is wicked good so far. i keep wanting to read and find out what will happen next. |
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GilkseySigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 17/02/08
i love it i love it i love it!!!! that was amazing!!!! definitly one of my ultimate faves! ahh! ilu!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/07/07
wow i did not see that coming! 
this is really great so far! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/06/07
cool. i love it. really interesting. i will read more  |
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There better be a sequil! To many times do they say there will be, but they don't make one. And I really liked the plot and story idea for this story! |
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drewberrySigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 22/05/07
awww! what a cute ending to the chapter! that was so beautifully cliche that... idk it just made my night! |
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drewberrySigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 22/05/07
uh uoh. i think that's exactly what vincent wanted. this is a problem... hopefully the trio will figure it out! |
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drewberrySigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 22/05/07
awwww! ronnikins is jealous! how cute and cannon! really cool bits with the soul magic too! can't wait to read more! |
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drewberrySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/05/07
Oh my god. This is so intense! great image with the fire and metal scattered everywhere. It really helped set the scene. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
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Justine83Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 19/05/07
The ending was so sad. You did a wonderful job with this story, and I can't wait to get started with the sequel. Again, great job! I plan on reading more of your stories this weekend as well! |
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KellyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/07
AWSOME STORY! Kudos! Anyway....I was wondering when the sequel is likely to start?? lol...you are a fantastic author...keep up the good work! I also really like the characterization and twists you put into the story! Can't wait for the sequel! Also...will we find out what happens to Narcissa and Bellatrix as well in the sequel?? |
Author Feedback: hrm, I'm just getting a few finer details sorted and then I should have the first chapter done. It may be a while considering I have a lot going on with university at the moment, but I can't imagine it will take any longer than a month. I know that may seem like a lot, but it will probably be the soonest possible time for me right now.
I'm very glad you enjoyed the story, and yes, you can expect to see more Narcissa and Bellatrix in the sequel. |
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This is the bets story ever I actually began to cry at the end How touching   If this were actually a Harry potter ending well it would be a great one. Written like a true author. Well done |
Author Feedback: Aw thankyou! That really means a lot to me!! |
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What is it with men lately? They're their own species lately instead of humans like the rest of us. Draco needs to face the facts and move on. Glad he at least took care of her, i'd give him points for that but not many. |
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