the nraiahthis was stupid i like dth e forbidden lov, but comeon, make them astucally have forbidden luv, bnut besided\\s tht i rlly like it

what's the plan? Oh this is very intruiging. It's very well written and I think they're pretty in character. I'm hoping that with Hermione's present comes a break-up letter from Ron. But I guess we shall see. I'm enjoying it. Update soon. (I hope it makes you feel very good to know that you're distracting me from a 5 page paper I have to write for tomorrow...shame on you...shame.)

Sweet! Harry and HErmione stuck togetehr for teh holidays, lots of things are bound to happen. Looking forward!

Another excellent chapter. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

This was a really cute chapter. I am excited to see what Harry is going to do for Hermione. I feel a little bad for Ron, but it's H/Hr. Lol. Well, hopefuly Hermione will just break up with Ron over break...

Hey, this seems really cute. I am excited to read more of this. I am glad to hear that this will span over Christmas break. It will give me something to read.

this seems like it is shaping up to be a really good story so please write more soon...

Really cute story so far. I like it a lot. I hope you update soon.

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Nice buildup, all the better as we take our time so as not to rush the consumation. . .

absoutely amazing...probably the best one i have read on here in a long time. keep it up and i will be waiting for the next chapter.

I love the story, but I'm a sucker for H/Hr and the Holiday season. Sigh. Now, can we talk about lie and lay? The entire weight of the Wizarding World lied on his shoulders. The weight of the world lay on his shoulders or was laid on his shoulders. You can be laid to rest but not lied. Its a little tricky I know, but a good proofreader would be invaluable here (of course I had to submit my story without the benefit of a beta, no one wanted to read thousands of words. . .) Having said that, I would be happy to look over anything you write before you send it along to Portkey.

im really liking this story so keep up the good work!!!!!!!

niice. wonder what our dear Harry boy is up to. he he he. hope an update comes soon. great work,.

Nice. Nothing very excited or really creative. A REALLY well know plot but still nice.

Lets see next chapter.

Aw...I love this chapter! Can't wait to see what Harry planned for Hermione.

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