cool. lol. I liked the missing transfiguration paper one the best, because James just got to be a regular ol' nice guy. And the whole black lace bra thing, lol. But the one I thought had the most emotion in it and was the most shocking was the divorce/pregnant one. Wow! What a row!

I like this one, but I reckon triwizard is way better, so keep writing that one will you?? thanks, you're a good writer, but try to get away from the lists

This was great- even though it jumped around, it had a nice flow. I absolutely loved it, and I felt like crying at how cute it was.

Actually, I really liked it. Strange, by my two favorite parts were when Lily lost her essay and James just took her up to bed, and then the part where they were fighting over the divorce. There was just something so heartwrenching in those parts, that made them bitter sweet. Pretty damn good for early morning writing. Thanks.
Cheers, Moon

That was utterly wonderful, it made me cry. James is so sweet and caring, and Lily reminds me of myself with the completely random mood swings and sobbing for a lot of different things... Um yes, that was lovely!!

y does this seem inspired by real life incidents?!! lolz! but rly gud!

Oh my effing god, I just spent the last weekend reading everyone of your Lily and James fiction that amused me and sparked my attention.

Sweets, I'm in love with your writing, care to write some more?

Oh my effing god, I just spent the last weekend reading everyone of your Lily and James fiction that amused me and sparked my attention.

Sweets, I'm in love with your writing, care to write some more?

OMG! this story was so GREAT! AWW i loved it!! yay heck yes i missed the insomniac stories! Aw it was really good! as always wicked job! dont stop writing and please write another story in the middle of the night!! ok later

Oooo. I loved this. Oh so very muchhhh. And I love you ah hem. Sorry for that random admission from a stranger. But this was amazing. It had me laughing out loud at various points. It sounds quite a bit like my boyfriend and me sometimes so hey. I hope your life gets better real soon. and remember NatiFcs28 is loved.

Your story was beautiful. The nice little snippets were perfect. I know what you mean about fighting with a best friend. I just ended my 13 year friendship with my best friend just in october. It hurts to fight with people you care a lot about. Good luck with everything!

nice. I really love all your one-shots - you're really good at writing them. Keep up the great insomniac work

This was so nice. I was crying when i read it because it's just so beautiful. It was a very moving piece and very well - written. You should definitely be proud of this fic.

~LK1512~

Hey. Sorry bout the motivation... But you produced a good fic from it Congrats.
So, if that what you imagined Lily and James to be like? Not the perfect couple everyone else thinks. They know how to fight- I loved it. You brought a better sense of reality to it. Everyboday fights. This just showed they are actually human (yes, I'm aware they are just characters in a book).
Again, awesome fic.
Catcha,
Spyro

Natali, this was one of my most favorite oneshot stories of all time. No joke. You warmed my heart, and seriously made me want a relationship just like this. I mean, damn, this was beautiful. I love the list, and the idea, and how you are able to turn these lists into these amazing stories which just make me want to run out, find a boy, and be like "DAMN IT, READ THIS AND UNDERSTAND PERFECTION!" And hug you. Because I loved this. The fight between Lily and James seriously had me worried. That was just so intense, and it was so real. I absolutely loved it. This was a wonderful story to come back to writing with. And thank you for the shout out in the opening. You warm my heart and make me feel all cuddly inside.

WHICH REMINDS ME. (For some odd reason...) The section where you talk about Lily losing her Transfiguration essay. Hot damn. I could totally sympathize with Lily. I understood what the poor girl felt. You had just written my life. And I am not kidding. And somehow, I feel like it could all be better if I had a boy like James to just step in and comfort once in a while. I thought that section was beautiful.

Once again Nati, you rock at life. And I truly miss talking with you. One of these days. Maybe after Mock Trial. I miss the spastic conversations we had. *huggles* I love you.

Love, Amanda