Well the intitial chapter seems quite interesting. I now know why it's AU b/c your characters are like the one in your other fic. Very interesting. I cannot wait to read more of this...

Well I believe I haven't read this story. And I didi love your I'm Not Nerotic Story. I am off to read more of this.

Hands down, my favorite chapter of the entire fic, maybe for the same reasons that you "really do love this chapter."

Maybe because of what *happened* but also because the writing was so eloquent; the words flowed off the screen and the chapter just seemed so... real. Awesome job.

you know, when I saw the title... *sigh*

I just looked at the reviews for this fic. The last four are all from me (now five). I suddenly feel kind of lame. *goes away*

so when I read that part of the list that said Hermione would soon owe Ginny 50 galleons I had this sudden mental image...

Ginny: 50 galleons please.
Hermione: O rly?
Harry: No let me pay!
Hermione: No way!
Harry: This relationship is at least half my fault - it takes two to tango!
Hermione: Okay!

Really lame, I know.

Anyways a real comment on the story. The way H/Hr realize their feelings for each other is kind of sudden... one moment they're just together in a house then the next there's omgsexualtensiongalore. Maybe a little more discussion of what actually triggered the change would help (for future stories, possibly).

Just my two cents (and more)...

just wanted to respond to that 10 words thing you talked about even though this story is "completed" and this chapter was written 9 months ago. i'm pretty sure portkey won't let you post a review unless it has ten words, so when someone does that it might not just be about the points (they can't physically post the review).

a review in numbered form! yay!

1. i love your quotes at the beginning of the chapters

2. ginny/ron interaction = lol. Your stories have this specific sense of humor that I really like

3. we might have the same birthday

4. awkward-ish pauses like the one on the train are also funny in their own way, kinda like the ginny/ron list at the beginning

oh and ps - I really like this story, if you haven't noticed

lol. great idea for a fic; very original. can't wait to see what happens... can't hurt that it's a comedy-ish fic either

I like everything the way you have it especially the real ending, although the list to get Ginny and Dean together would have been funny, great threat on Harry and Hermione's part.

i really enjoyed this fic it was really fun hehehehh.. not to mention those quotes.. icing on the cake heheh

you are a devil!!! i thought that new year's kiss would be their union at last.. you got me ther.. you really got me there! well, so much for that teaser of yours hahahah! niiiiccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeee!

I loved it, it was so cute. While I found Hermione's father a little TOO over the top...it was still a really cute/awesome read.

i orginally read this on hpff but then i found it on here and i just had to add it to my favorites and tell you how much i truly love this story it is so sweet

Thanks very much for this fic. Very amusing, I enjoyed it alot! Cant wait to read more of ur fics in the future!

Great Job! That was a really cute stroy and I enjoyed reading it. Once again, Ginny is her evil self, but a good way, she after all, was the main one who helped Harry and Hermione get together.

Great job, I wouldn't change anything about this if I could (even though the Mona/Harry thing would be really funny!)

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Molly