OK. I love that Harry is a godfather and is getting to do what Sirius never had the chance to. The start of this fic is beautiful, really descriptive and atmospheric. But why have you paired off Ron with LAVENDER (not Luna) and Ginny with NEVILLE (of all people)! Neville! Yeah ok he`s lovely but he`s not exactly a stud muffin like Draco is he? What`s wrong with Draco???

I really can`t see Ginny being happy with Neville and having his child! Unless Draco died or something so now she`s married to Neville cos he`d be a good father for Draco`s child. Right back to the fic (soz got a bit carried away there!) - `Harry reached down and grabbed his bear and gulped it down hard` - I think the spelling mistake is unintentional but it REALLY made me laugh! Hard!

`We all know that you’re gay!` - hahahahahahahaha V. funny! Yay for little old lady! Landen is soo sweet, he just melts your heart!
Merlin that is one helluva scary ending! Can`t wait to read the next chapter to clarify! Hope Landen is all right!
Very exciting chapter, great writing!!!