*squeals loudly* I love it!!!! I'm all for protective Harry and somehow vulnerable Hermione (while still trying to e so proper about it). The situation with Melissa (in "Bookworms Revenge", which I did read first) made me angry and sympathetic to her--guys don't seem to realize that girls head straight for the heart without the fisticuffs.
But Harry walked right in and played knight in shining armor. Simply Lovely.

oh my god!! really now! this one is even better than the first one! i thought when i found out that there wasn't a next chapter to bookworms revenge i would cry..not knowing what happened next..thank god that you have written this one!! this story just defined the saying that sure the sequel is good and big but it is never better than the original..well..read this story and slap yourself..for this one just broke that saying!! man! you are good!! really and you do have a great sense of humour!! seriously!!

again with the cuteness and the giggle and joy etc

Great Job! I would just like to say, that I am soooo happy you wrote somthing like this (and the first story too). These are my absoulte favorite stories, and you did a great, amazinf, wonderful job of writing them! Keep up the great work!

i love love this story...so much...it is one of the best ones i've read.

I love this sequel, it's a great ending and Melissa got her foot in her mouth where it belongs!

this is way too short, you really need to do more, i don't mean to sound insulting when i say this though, i mean this is absolutely AWESOME! which is why you really need to add more, maybe from melissa's point of view?

yay! another wonderful story! i loved it. thanks for writing it.

i think you did a great job with the character development. i really don't like Melissa at all, but i love Harry's character even more than i did before.

i like how easily you got Ginny out of the way too. at least Ginny seems to be more like herself in your story - immature and avoiding Harry.

My favorite part, though, was the end. I agree with Harry, as sweet as the revenge was, Harry and Hermione kissing is a whole lot better. :-)

Awww...Harry's so cute and I really liked his determined effort to make Hermione feel special and how he sussed out her reasons so quickly.

Also, Harry's comment on the size of the necklace was absolutely perfect. The fact that he had the money to spend, but also knew her well enough was just wonderful.

LOL. This fic was great. Though I can see so much more being done with this type of plot. A much longer, more detailed fic. Also, would have been cool to have Melissa find out Harry is rich. ^_^ Great fic!

Your story was such a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work and I hope to see more from you soon!

That was an awsome follow up for the first. I love the confident Harry you use, who isn't afraid to go for the girl. I still want more though....

Maybe the story through Melissa'a eyes?

Thanks for writing that! It's nice to see the events from Harry's point of view. Well done!

*Intence screaming and squeling* I'm so gald you did a sequle! This was absoluty perfect! I love the whole Dimond debate and I'm glad Harry got it for her. Again great job! ----tiger111991

ok this is better than the first one but come make another chapter about what happen aftwards like how hermiones parents react and ron and ginny i dont know this is really cute. Good job