A very enjoyable story. I like how you portrayed Crookshanks; a very interesting support characters. As for Ron, yeah, he may be portrayed as an overly jealous hot-head, but it isn't too far fetched given his act/talk first, think later approach.

If I have one qualm, it would be more me than this story. Perhaps it's from my "delusional" romantic side, but I cannot see Harry ever having sex with Ginny. And there's no way I could believe that the train wreck known as Ron/Hermione could last long enough to get to that level of intimacy. Therefore reading Harry and Hermione talking about their respective numerous times with Ginny and Ron really jarred me. Especially given that the two are beginning a new and truly meaningful relationship. But that's just me.

Either way, it's still a good story

Chris

very good fic - unfortunately while it is not particularly flattering for ron and
Ginny - it appears to be true to canon - double standards R us Weasleys.
thanks for sharing - sometimes a oneshot is refreshing after all the unfinished works one finds.
warm regards

MADSCIENTIST!!! Bout time you show your face again man! Been a follower of yours for quite some time now.

Great story, Cant stand Ron half the time, I just hate the fact that Hermione and Ron shagged... thats disgusting. Its not as bad with Harry screwing Ginny because hes a guy (I only mean that men putting it in isnt as bad as women getting it in, you know? no offense of sexism against women). I prefer their relationships in Lions and Circle, where the former had none and the latter didnt go past snogging (that I know of, please dont correct me if they did more, I couldnt handle it!!!!)

Oh and, I can draw for shit man, but Ill look around at my school and see if anyone is up to it, I know several HP fans (its all secret, we have reps y'know?) If I cant find someone, Ill do it, Ill just get help.

See ya around and hopefully Ill see more work from you.

Aww this story was soo good! The ending was really sweet too! Anyway love all your stories so write more soon!

Okay, I'm a bit confused. Hermione shagged Ron, is that right? Harry did or didn't shag Ginny? I kinda thought that Ginny would be a two-timer as well. Poor Harry . I'm glad Hermione's making things better for him by loving him. And her thoughts on what Ron could do and what Voldemort is were fantastically expressed. Even with the need for Ron to be a hard-ass in this story it was really good. I enjoyed reading it. Another Kudos to you for another great story! Keep up the great work as always and I'm eagerly awaiting your next updates and new stories.

I liked it. It was a good read and good reads are, usually, the best.

great little fic. though ron was well how he was he was pretty in character.. he has always been jealous of harry, thinking that it's all Harry Harry Harry. well great job!!
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit

I love Crookshanks in this fic, as I've said before. And the depth of the relationship between H/Hr is so well displayed.

Don't forget to post it in the Library.

Nice little one-shot. I'm eager to see your 'new' projects and hope that they continue your historical trend of excellent reads. Thanks so much for writing!

Thnaks for this wonderful one shot. You portray your characters so very well. I could really feel the pain, jealousy from Ron and finally the the beginning of love between harry and Hermione.

Man your stories rock!!! I cant wait to see what else is up your sleeve! You are are deffinately on of my top 3 authors!!!

Man your stories rock!!! I cant wait to see what else is up your sleeve! You are are deffinately on of my top 3 authors!!!

Man your stories rock!!! I cant wait to see what else is up your sleeve! You are are deffinately on of my top 3 authors!!!

Lokk, this was good one shot. Personally JKr has not done anything worthwhile to make Ron look like a good character. Sorry I know u like Ron, nut I don't. The guy actually has the balls to accuse hermione of betraying harry at the Yule Ball and completely humiliates her and here we are supposed to understand that the guy has feelings for her and even worse, we have to understand that Hermione likes him back.
This jealousy business has gone far too long for now. Either JKr should end up killing him or making him betray harry or something akin to your fic "the cost of betrayal"
Another thing is that Jkr says that Harry and Ginny had a long emotinal journey or some such Bullshit in the IOD. god knows who she was talkin about.

Good one shot. I just think that the conversation would fit a little better in a Post Hog enviroment. They don't look like teenagers- and mature or not- they still are.