awesome!! keep it up...i felt everything they were feeling...ha ha it was great

Really good story... loved the ending. Perfect..
Yes I am very cool.

That was fantastic! I an not one for swearing, but I thought it added a nice touch (as odd as that may sound) Great writing and excellent story! (I loved the ending too!)

Cool is my middle name if you must know. Sure my first is not, but why get hung up on details? Loved this. Normally don´t go for fics where cheating is involved, but this was great. And hilarious if I may add. You made me laugh out loud several times, and laugh quietly to myself. *note spoiler alert for deathly hallows*



*still sure?*




Don´t give up the ship. Keep writing, may Harmony live on through fanfiction. Much Love, Moi.

Peer pressure for reviews. Nice touch.

I enjoyed reading this story. I think it has potential to be more than a one-shot, but you did well creating the characters as they are and then defining their intentions with their interactions. Well done.

Peer pressure for reviews. Nice touch.

I enjoyed reading this story. I think it has potential to be more than a one-shot, but you did well creating the characters as they are and then defining their intentions with their interactions. Well done.

Nah, I'm not cool, but I couldn't not review such a lovely story. I'm a big fan of when Harry gets jealous of Hermione, but when Harry is making someone else jealous by being with Hermione, it's almost as fun. Wonderful! Ron's a jerk and I'm a little mad at Harry for keeping Ron and Luna's relationship a secret when he so clearly has been pining for Hermione for ages, but I'm guessing if he kept kissing her like he had been, Hermione wan't going to get mad at Harry. Aww, very cute!

Great story. Haven't read the original, probably won't -- if you've revamped it to make it better, I'll take your word for it.
I really like strong, protective Harry, and Hermione always was loyal to a fault. (Now we can have that loyalty directed to Harry -- yay!) Nice characterizations. It seems realistic, too, that after years of being in Harry's shadow at school, Ron would go gaga at the opportunities afforded by fame. Seems a little off that Luna would be moving in on Hermione's guy (in canon she seems, though ditzy, NICE).

That was kind of sad when poor hermione had to watch Ron cheat on her but really good! I loved how Harry was there for her. Great job!

The writing in this was very detailed and poetic. I really liked it, and it was also a lot of fun. Good story!!!

Didn't seem all that much different from the first story. Both are good, but in both I see a bit of overly obvious daftness in Hermione. She's dating an idiot and has a nice guy ogling after her. Normally, that wouldn't matter but the fact that she's known them both since childhood just bares on the fact that she picked the idiot first.

You didn't really explain why she was with Ron, she just sort of 'was' and then she 'wasn't. In many romance stories, the girl who usually takes the nice guy for granted usually turns up to be the romantic antagonist and a girl who knows what he's worth usually turns out to be the romantic protaganist.

I'm so glad I clicked on your name to see what else you had written. It's really difficult for people to write post-Hogwarts stories and still have the right characterization, but somehow or another you did so perfectly (heck, it's even hard to get their characterizations in a Hogwarts fic - like with me for instance lol).

Anyway, another amazing fic. I really enjoyed it! Keep up the amazing work, and I'm looking forward to another chapter in New and Improved Hermione Granger or another one-shot from you. I really do love your writing.

that was really sweet! quite original too. i can't believe that Ron would do that to Hermione! or Luna, for that matter. that's really sad. it must have been really hard for Harry not to tell her. and i can't believe that Hermione stayed with Ron for that long. i don't mean that as a criticism - i'm just shocked more than anything because I never pictured their characters like that. but, it worked really well. although i hope that Harry refuses to be friends with Ron until he makes amends.

the ending was so nice too. yay! i love Harry and Hermione together. and i really, really love sweet, caring Harry. thank you so much for writing! i hope you write more!

Hmm... Haven't read 'Sweet Revenge', but this was fairly nice for a Ron-cheats-on-Hermione story. I suppose Luna thought Ron had already broken up with Hermione? I don't quite see her as the type of person to actively participate in an affair...

The ending here is almost good, but it is a bit abrupt. Somewhat of a sudden stop.

Wow... I accually like this story. I was taking the unexpected task from fictionalley. I am a slasher, hence me reading harmony for the task, and I really didn't think I could find a story I'd like, but this story is really well-writen. I can't stand this pairing, but it was a nice enough plot, and mild enough in content, it didn't bother me.

Congrats on the story, I'm a rather hard to please person,

Cae