I absolutely loved that! It was beautifully written!
Oy, Drunk!Ron is absolutely priceless - all of those comments about his wanting to marry both Harry and Hermione - that was absolutely hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing. It was fabulous!
The love scene was sweet, and I love the way you portrayed their first time - it was sweet that Harry had never done it before either...
Although, when Hermione said "I had no idea" I was confused as to what she was referring to - but I think that's just me... I still have no idea...

*feels stupid because she needs clarification*
Hehe, anyhow - the story was brilliant! You're a fantastic writer, and the wording you used, and the way everything was described was all fabulous. I loved it! I can't wait to see more of your writing!
-Michelle