I'm sure I've read this before. And it was good last time too. Its still beautiful now. Just thought you should know.

Aww... that was sweet. Lovely story. There aren't quite as many fics from the perspective of Harry's being in love with Hermione first. Usually it starts out the other way around but I always enjoy the idea of Harry mooning after Hermione. lol good job.

So what did you do with the end lose it or some thing.

Wow.
What an ending.
What a story.

"Except that boy hadn’t been him. It hadn’t been him, and it hurt him deep inside where it wasn’t supposed to hurt that it wasn’t him, and any guilt he had over her tears was nothing compared to what he was feeling now, how lost he was now that he knew she was irrevocably beyond him…"
That there is just one one of the many lines that made me hold my breath.

And okay, I just have to say this right. As of this moment, this is by far my favourite story out of all the rest. Oh, man. Wow. I just, I just absolutely, positively love your writing.

This whole piece was just engaging, and sweet and funny, and romantic, and you hit all of the characters right on. I did wish to see a bit more of Ron, but that's only because he's my favourite character. No matter, this still managed to hold me t my seat, glue my eyes to the screen and smile and laugh and grin with delight.

I really like how your wrote things from Harry's point of view. I'm a sucker for the sort of pining romance with the guys fumbling and staring. It's sweet to picture and awfully amusing.

Your portrayal of Harry and Draco's feelings toward each other was strong. It definitely showed they're keen dislike and it could very well be possible that Hermione wouldn't warm up to Luna. They're personalities are just too far off, I guess.

Okay, so I'm rambling. Just wanted to let you know that this is fantastic stuff.

Wow, that was a great story. Thank you for writing it.

You described the feelings and emotions very well, as well as the scenes where they were affectionate with each other. I could picture it clearly in my mind and I could really feel it myself while reading. That made it a very intense read, and I felt like I was sucked into the story. Very good job.

You wrote “The End” and marked the story as complete, but you left me really curious to find out what happened next. Does she tell him how she feels about him? Do they kiss? Does she still go to Hogsmeade with Neville? Maybe you intended this open ending, but I’m hoping you’ll add more to this story.

Keep up the good work.

It was nice and I liked it very much but at the end it's a little confusing. I don't want to be too critical but I thought that I should say this.

I don't know what prompted me to reread this, but I did and I was, once again, blown away by it.

It was simple and it was brief, but you managed to pack a lot of emotion into this. Great job.

As always, thanks for sharing. This was nice little diversion during a particularly trying day.

I have absolutely NO idea where you're from, but I doubt it's the NE of Scotland, cos if it was you'd know that an Aberdonian accent is utterly fucking incomprehensible to anyone who hasn't spent half their life in this bloody hell hole. If you're not from round here it's impossible to understand the local accent, and it certainly doesn't lend itself to the sort of vocal projection McGonnagal is capable of. She's almost certainly from the west coast, the name, incidentally, being another clue - most of the families with 'Mc' or 'Mac' names originate on the west coast.

Oh no you didn't, it's just wow, I mean what just happened? was that a 'I love you too' or 'sorry we can't be more than friends' OMG. AMAZING, I'm in shock but all I can say it's Amazing, and I know I don't make sense, but I loved it.

wow. this was great. i really liked how harry assumed that she must have noticed that he liked her because she is hermione and she notices everything. that was really cute. anyway, great job!

Very good. An enjoyable read, and it brought a smile to my face, which is always a plus.

I enjoyed the fact that it was Hermione who was the 'late bloomer' in regards to recognizing her feelings for Harry; usually, it's the complete opposite, so it's always nice to see things turned around a bit.

Good writing, too. A few grammatical mistakes here and there, but the type I make myself far too often, so I can certainly sympathize.

I have to give you credit, too, for the part in the beginning where Harry and Hermione were just holding each other. The way it was written gave the scene great intimacy, and it was easily my favorite section.

Kudos! A good, solid story.

That was a spectacular one shot. Job definately well done. =)

No need to respond to this message ... as it has been pre-written for both of our conviences ... I will from time to time add comments at the top or the bottom of this message but that is just because I care!

Due to craziness that has become the the standard of my life here we go with what I will call my pre-written standard disclaimer review ...

This has been an excellent jigger (aka: one-shot), I look forward to reading the next chapter ... and in all honesty ... and in all fairness ... I am trying to

a) add review numbers to your wonderful story

b) add portkey points to my dwindling numbers

c) remind you that the insanity that is NaNoWriMo is coming up starting Nov 1st *LOL* and I am not trying to over stress my already overtired creative brain with coming up with witty repartee for this review that is otherwise being utilized for my long and drawn out disclaimers to make up the majority of my 50K goal for the month of November *grin*!

d) just to let you know that yes somebody is actually reading this and did care to post a review but was too lazy (like me) to come up with something witty or critical to say ... *grin*

Oh, Honestly though, (That's my Hermione coming out!) this has been an excellent jigger (aka one-shot)! I wouldn't be reading this story if it wasn't that good!

All the best,
As Always,
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Oooh, I loved this. All of it.

Such a very Hermione-ish thing to do, isn't it? Deliberately seat herself (and her best friend) at the same table as Malfoy in an attempt to foster inter-house unity.

I don't know why, but I love stories with a wee bit of jealousy in them. Not a lot, but a bit. You handled the entire Harry-jealous-of-Hermione-going-to-Hogsmeade-with-Neville part very well. I could just see it all playing out before my eyes, with Harry struggling to express himself and finally just blurting it out. A very teenage-boy thing to do.

Nice job!

Adorable. Just totally fluffy and adorable, I loved it. It's just so cute you can't, ya know? Great job.