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melferd
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
I loved it from start to finish, thanks for this!!!!
**wishes hopelessly for this 'verse to continue***
You really created a brilliant world with this..hate to see it end, but thanks for the work.
Tia, Mel
 

jessie179
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
Waste of time?! I think not! This had to have been one of the best, if not thee best, story I've read in a very very long time. It not only kept you on the edge of your seat, the ending wasn't bland or weak. It was wonderful, truly wonderful. And if you wish to write more to go along with it, I'll be there to read it.

Cheers!
 

gl1346
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
Great ending!! I loved the storyline in its entirety, but this was just completely unexpected . Great job. I hope you continue, as Death's Hollow doesn't sound too promising to me. You're right, you can take this as far as you'd like. It was a great idea, and I hope you cash in on your investment. Keep it up!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/07
too lond winded. very tiring to read. no balance. bleh. too bad. your story sucks.
 

Talion
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
I thought this was truly a fantastic story. I also find it interesting that Harry and Hermione will know each other and already be best friends for 11 years before going to Hogwarts. That will make things very interesting indeed, and all the more sweeter when they fall in love down the road.

Do you have any plans of writing sequels to this? I think it would be an interesting series. Voldemort is still out there, so Harry will still have to face him. However, he now has the help and support of his parents, as well as a never-jailed Sirius. Plus his soulmate has been by his side since they could walk. I for one would love to see how you would handle the HP series with this difference. I know it's a big undertaking, but I hope you consider it!
 

LegalAlien
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
Wonderful new chapter!

I really had to laugh at Hermione's words about shaking Hogwarts upside-down!
Please write more soon!
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/01/07
Well, I guess that makes sense for the age thing, but I'm not that good at looking at the details to figure it out. Lovely little job.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 01/01/07
Well, this is quite interesting. They went back into time instead of forward. I guess that is a lot better. Wow, this story is quite intricate and very interesting.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/01/07
Oh wow...that is quite intricate. I did read most of that stuff about the battle, but it's late and I got lazy. I just needed to know they've been back in time. Great job.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/01/07
This was very interesting. Lovely little job. I loved it. Great job. I liked the fact that you are explaining what's goign on. Lovely job.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/07
Well, that was a great job. Lovely. Wonderful. I am very interested to see what is up with Neville.
 

fenriswolf
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
Despite my early misgivings it was an excellent story, but ultimately not terribly satisfying. Why? Because the Harry and Hermione we meet at the very end aren't *our* Harry and Hermione, they're much more James and Lily Jr. Harry is Harry because of everything that happened to him as a child, and erasing that completely negates far too much of his makeup. The Boy-Who-Lived is also the Boy-Who-Grew-Up-In-A-Cupboard. As for Hermione, while not abused, her behavior in book one makes it clear she grew up very lonely, with no siblings and few if any friends because of her intelligence and her overcompensation. Having her grow up with one steadfast friend all through her younger years is going to alter her as well.

I suppose I'd be a lot happier if our Harry and Hermione had survived the fight and gone away as planned. Having them die and their bodies vanish makes it seem like their entire existence was only so they could sacrifice themselves on Fate's altar, and while I acknowledge the Three Norns' roles in our existence, it doesn't mean I like it.

I think I'd rather read a version where Harry and Hermione arrive at school and, among others, meet two young teachers who have just joined the staff. That's my idea of a happy ending....
 

pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
Nice ending. Excellent manipulation by Albus, though it seems a far shot - really far - for H&H to be reunited in the new AU. But that's alright
 

Hotaru
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
Very well done. I enjoyed every word. You could have made it a bit clearer what happened to the 'original' Harry and Hermine, but you finished it with style, nonetheless... Well done.
 

toga party
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 01/01/07
no way! it wasnt a waste of time, its crazy how everying just fit together at the end and made it perfect, and the hermione/harry ship is suuuuuppppeeerr cute, i love it, especially when they had the background with eachother, it reminds of me of this fanart pic by gwendy,dont worry i dont think you wasted your time, it was a beautiful story, keep it up!!!!!!!!!! http://planetmyhill.com/EmeraldSpellbook/Fanart/HarryAndHermione30.jpg
 

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