AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/03/07
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/03/07
Ok... What was that about? I don't get it...  I hope that what I'm thinking did not happen! |
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aziSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 03/02/07
I really liked this story! It was wonderful and the ending was perfect! |
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lierianSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 21/01/07
I really loved this story. At first I wished for more background on how they got toghether in thier 7th year but quickly came to relaize that it wasn't really relevant to the story-just the fact that they were toghether was. It was very clever having them go back insteand of forward and having them angst over not being able to change anything and the paradoxes that might ensue if they tried. The ending is wonderful. It's exactly what one wishes for Harry; there is no escaping the prophecy but just imagine how much more he can accomplish with the love and support of his family and friends thorought all his childhood. I loved the little scene with H/Hr sneaking a touch of hands under the table, I guess they both remember a bit of thier alternate selves.  Hope to read more from you in this particular AU or from your WIP of Harry's 7th year.
Lierian |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 20/01/07
Wonderful, really. Just wonderful. I'm never disappointed by one of your fics. I do hope you're actively pursuing a writing career. |
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 06/01/07
'A total waste of everyone's time'?
Yeah right!!!
I love this story, because it is just so unique from the other 'bring back Lily and James' stories. Not to mention the HHR is very very very.....well, I think you know where I'm going with this
Awesome story. Happy New Year!
-- Sage |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/01/07
Awesome! I haven't read a story this good since I first started reading fanfictions. I do seriously hope that you continue this story. Also, I would love to hear your theories and such about Harry/Hermione. Feel free to contact me, crscntrygy@comcast.net. Again, awesome story. |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 03/01/07
I really thought that you were going to allow 'our' Harry and Hermione to survive in your story - particularly with the glimpse of hope offered by Hagrid, in that no bodies were found - but they really died, didn't they? Because OUR Harry and Hermione weren't anywhere to be seen here. To the last I expected them to pop up as next door neighbours or the like.
I'm glad that you provided hints that Harry's friendship with Hermione, this time around, wasn't coincidental, that it was orchestrated - which makes total sense. I was wondering when James or Lily would recognise 11-year-old Hermione as the same person as the woman who rescued them that night. But they didn't cotton on to that until just this instant, theorising that Dumbledore had purposely set them up with the Grangers.
But Dumbledore never got to actually SEE the old Harry and Hermione, did he? How would he have known it was Hermione Granger? Even if he'd viewed one of the Potters' memories in the pensieve, how could he have connected the image of an 18-year-old Hermione with the one-year-old child whose name had been recorded by the magical quill?
How did Dumbledore come to the realisation that Hermione Granger was the witch who accompanied the wizard-who-looked-like-James to the Potters' that night?
Charming picture of a Harry having been bought up from scratch with loving parents, godparents and his best friend. Very nice indeed.
Thanks for the story! |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 03/01/07
Enjoyable story, although I feel that with this one - with many of your stories - you try to have plots that are TOO complex, too complicated, that require too much exposition - embodied in narrative or by Hermione pontificating at length - to prop them up.
I thought the previous chapter had a pretty good battle scene and a wonderfully creepy/evil/powerful Voldemort, but looking back I'm confused as to how our heroes survived (albeit briefly). Magic triangles, blood circles, pieces of Voldemort in scars, brother wands, Snape's potion, the diary, Hermione's magic (augmented by potion) attacking the diary, and then a tenuous attempt to connect them all to a power of 'love'.
And I thought they'd survive in the end, but you KILLED THEM!!! :-( |
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Happy 2007! I love your story! I really liked the whole time travel thing. The last chapter was great, I would enjoy reading the Hogwarts tales of the "new" Harry and Hermione. Your writing is great! |
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Awww...I love this story!! You're an awesome writer, I've read Pendulum of Tears, and loved that one too...well you'll read my review on that...but this one is just as good, you have unique and interesting ideas and plots for your stories, and then carry them out perfectly...wonderful job! Keep up the good work in your writing!!
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*grinning* hee hee, I had a feeling about this!They've gone back not forward, awesome!! Lol, this has me glued, can't wait to see what happens...so I'll stop talking and keep reading!!
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Yes, baffled would be a good word...I'm confused as hell, and don't know why, but wasn't expecting Malfoy to be impersonating Neville...but anyways...I'm on to the next chapter, still likeing this story!!
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Good story so far! I had a feeling Neville was up to something when he was asking Harry and Hermione all those questions...Well, off to read the next chapter, I'm liking this so far!!
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I don't know what a group of falcons is called, but a murder is a group of crows. Anyways, good story so far! |
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