I am so intersted! Although I really want to suggest you into puting a AU warning in your summary, some people really love AU ( cough cough ME!) and they would have read your story in a heart beat. Please update soon!

your a freak. hary's not a murderer. why did he do it this is way to confusing for me. i cant read on

I don't know why you said we'd hate this chapter! I actually liked it! So, Hermione and Riddle...hmm...I was sort of waiting for that. I mean, it would make perfect sense. Hermione and Riddle are both stubborn, intelligent... I think Hermione was a little poisonous(sp?) with Harry but hey, she has no fault in that. After all, Harry DID put little Amy in a coma!

-katrina

Wait...I know I should begin the review commenting things about your fic and all that, because that's what I always do - if your fic is worth of praising - and then I move to the chapter in question. But I just have to say it: A murderer?! Wait, he killed Amy Benson?! Wow, that shocked me!

Anyway, on to the thing I always do when I review one fic for the first time: I like this story. They're all orphans and stuff, and that's...well, that's good. It's all in plot's sake, after all.

I think you have a good writing style and your story definetly has future.

I wish Harry and Hermione could've had a better conversation than just Tom Riddle. Or Amy wouldn't have barged in so they could've. Anyways, I would've liked some changes but I wouldn't have it any other way. You need all these details for the story line.

hmm, very interesting. Ginny's character is starting to get really annoying, and I have a feeling that little boy is going to be key. Jus out of curiosity, will Dumbledore or Hogwarts or any of the proffesors for the matter be making an appearance?

A very interesting story so far!
I'm very much looking forward to reading on, so I hope that you'll update soon.

this amy is bloody fucking annoying i say waht is wrong with that girl..honestly!!!!!!!

the story is interesting do far keep up the great work. update soon.

ooooooh. Man, do I fell stupid now that I've gone back and figured out who Amy-person is . . . Is the orphanage like a sort of attraction for magical people? Because Helen seems to be like McGonagall, and Flich is like Filch . . . funky cool, man! Anywho, ignore my crazy ramblings, and instead focus your energy on the new chapter!

Er . . . . did I miss something? Who the hell is Amy? Anywho, fantabuloso chapter, and I hope that more is on the way . . . I think I'm becoming addicted!

great start and not bad at all for not being native english. its really interesting so far and i cant wait to read the next chapter so get it out soon



~CC

ahh, that makes me really sad that Ginny and Ron aren't brother and sister, unless maybe they were like seperated when they where born? And, are the twins going to be making an appearance, it sounds to me like that orphanage could really use their humor, but at the same time, it is really weird to think of the twins, ron, and ginny all together and not related. Umm, maybe they could all be like reunited, lol, that would be cool. Anyway, good story so far, once again, I am very interested to see where this goes

this is a very intriguing start. I am curious to see where you will go with this. Will Ron or Hermione or anyone else we know be making an appearance soon?

Hey, you write better than me, and I AM a native english speaker. Obviously you have mad skill, my friend.

Anywho, great chapter. Is it Hermione who's in the carriage? And what about Ron or the rest of the Weasleys, if Ginny is an orphan?

Update soon, please!