the end was... confuse... I can never really understand it when the fanfics are a mixture between dreams and realities...

I mean, why was Hermione crying now? if she was crying for Harry, then why wasn't she nest to him, to wait fir him to wake up.

And what do you mean by unlocking doors in the DoM (ginny said that in the begginig).

COuld you please, please, please explain it to me?

Cheers*

one... two... three...

IMPERIUS !!!!!!!!!!

Now you are under my power. You are to change the final of this fic to something better... Where Harry and Hermione wil be together, start a relationship... I order you to do so... You are under my power...

Ok i'm sorry for my last review, i didnt understand what was happening but this chapter cleared everything up. It was a really good chapter too

This story is a little confusing for me, its okay, but confusing.
I also find it kinda weird that all of them were orphaned but I understand that you need it for your story to work. But you could have made up a few other people for Harry to be friends with.
I know that this is your story but isn't it a little weird having Riddle as the same age as them? And Sirius how did he get into the story and who did you have as Harry's Godfather??

All in all its an okay story, not one of my favorites but it is okay!

*Sigh* This fic is so amazing! Really! Ever since the first chapter I just totally loved it. One question though...how old are they? I got a little confused in it =S

Hope you update soon!

So glad that you updated! Can't wait to read more about his. Please update soon. I"m very curious with the outcome. Great chapter!

... wow, you certainly give a lot to thnik about... So, my best guess is that Harry fought Voldie and somehow they both passed out, and the battle continued in Harry's mind.

And this... battle is what this fic is all around... It seems to be AU, but it's not. I mean, that's the only way I can explain the 'diary girl' and the appearances of Dumbledore...

Am I close?

Update ASAP**

Love it!! It's kind of 2nd year appearing... the way Ginny truisted the diary so much, now she trusts the person...

But, here between us, I would freak out if I had to live in that orphanage... Seems like people being murdered is a everyday thing...

Cheers*

hi! quick question... why engaged??? why not just boyfriend/girlfriend?? it would sound far more credible...

I mean, one day they don't talk to each other, the next day they are engaged??? Tom's smarter than that...

Cheers

I only have read till this chap, but I'd like to say that this fic is... weird? not in a bad way... I like it, but I don't understand it (does that make any sense??)...

Cheers and Update ASAP

ENGAGED? What does that mean? I loved that part about Tom and Hermione though. Even though I notice that Tom likes Ginny ( and Ginny seem to like him back) Harry's worst enemy getting closer to Hermione does tense up the drama.

. . . to become engaged?

Alright -- new chapter, missy, and soon!! This is killing me!!

this is so AU and so out there.. it almost makes me think Harry is in some sort of dream sequence or something. I like it, you just need to update more

Oh I liked this chapter! So Sirius Black has arrived!

Well, I suppose I don't have to tell you again how much I love this story.

Now you have me wondering... Harry is asked to become engaged?! Hmm...curious. I'll most certainly wait for it.

-katrina

how sad, I feel really bad for Harry. And I know that he is up to no good with Hermione, he is doing something evil to her