AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/08/07
awwwwww, that is so sad! poor hermione! and stupid harry and ginny!  SEQUEL!!!!!! |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/07
Wow. This is gutwrenching, and heartbreaking, and I love it! This is beautifully written; you can feel her heartbreak and anguish. Great job!
~Cat |
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Aww, How sad! It breaks my heart to think that Harry would lose his virginity to that harlot Ginny. I just want to hug Hermione and tell her that all is not lost. Someday Harry may finally wake up and realize he belongs with her.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/10/06
Who doesn't understand Hermione or J K Rowling? Depressing but well written.  |
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ooh, that was pretty painful!! it was nice and dramatic, and your use of repetition of the title was good. This is the kind of story that can relate to other people. Keep it up! |
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Ginny is the slut of the school? That's pretty harsh. I think it would have helped if I had understood more of what was going on, because I have a lot of faith in Harry's loyalty and honor, and I can't believe he'd cheat on Hermione if they were together.
Elessar |
Author Feedback: But they weren't together! And in this story's purposes, yes, Ginny is a slut. |
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I absolutely positively loved it! It was so sad...but very well written with an excellent perspective into how Hermione is feeling. Good job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/06
This is absolutely fantastic, heartbreaking, and beautiful. Your writing style has a rare grace and flow to it. Please, please write a sequel! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much...I try to write like things really are. However, this is the end of this ficlet, moving on to better, happier things. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/06
seems to me it's begging for a second chapter to prove she's wrong about what really happened. (hint,hint). otherwise, I think it's a little too sad, although true to what sometimes happens in real life. |
Author Feedback: sorry, this is the end. |
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i love this it really transcends into another part of hermione taht we dont normaly see. very good
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Author Feedback: Thanks, that's what I was hoping to do! |
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JomppaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/06
Thanks, I really needed that. This short piece exactly describes my feelings at times. I don't understand it either... |
Author Feedback: Thanks. It is difficult, and we may never understand...but that's why I write. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
o0o0o0o pleas continue this story its really good and i want to know what comes next for hermione |
Author Feedback: sorry, this is the end of it |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
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Author Feedback: No, this is the end of this story. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
It may have been short, but it left alot of unanswered questions too. *G* Must be giving yourself something to add to this huh? *G*
Lisa |
Author Feedback: Not really, it's jsut a one-shot  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
This was a really good story. You got the emotions just right. You should really continue this one-shot i think it could go into a much bigger story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, but it was just a one-shot. |
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