RiXXSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/10/06
You know, it's not as easy as Harry makes it look 
Great ficlet, nice to see they're still having fun together, and that Seamus is still obsessed with liquor.
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happyladySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/10/06
Hi Mad
It's great having you post more of your wonderful
story. I just love this one shot. It's really HOT
(fan's self)
Until next time
Gloria |
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not being a drinker my self, I kind of have trouble with alcohol induced PDAs - not the PDA part, just the seeming show off part - but it is still a well written, hot story.
thanks |
Author Feedback: When they did the shooter they were more or less sober...  |
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Ohhhh, that was fun, I'd love to see more of this plot, story. Actually I'm enthused pretty much by anything you write.  |
Author Feedback: Shrug...who knows... Thanks |
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el_toro12Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
OOOOOH. HOT. HOT. HOT. No, really, I love seeing stories like this, where they don't have a care in the world and can finally act the way they should be for people their ages. Or maybe a bit racier perhaps. But still, fairly normal.
DDay |
Author Feedback: Yeah, they are making up a touch for being a bit too busy when they were younger... |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
They are definitely very yummy together!  I love the flash of the ring that the boys saw. That was perfect! |
Author Feedback: She always knows when to do that. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
Hi,
I just wanted to let you know that I have really enjoyed your Harry Potter and the Circle's End Saga. I don't normally review but your stories are so good I had to let you know. I have reread most of your stories more than once and always find myself coming back to them. Keep up the good work and the awesome storylines. Thanks for keeping me entertained. |
Author Feedback: Thanks |
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mrrlyn42Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
I love it!!! i cant wait for the sequel to come!!! pls finish it soon and get it posted! |
Author Feedback: There is a sequel  ....  We'll see... |
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Wonderful little cookie!  I like the idea of Harry and Hermione being so self-confident after their wounds from the War have healed, and I especially like the idea of the bookworm turning into a minx when she comes out of her chrysalis. Well done! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, Fenris... it's nice to hear from one of the folks that got me into this medium...
Hermione has grown up, alright, she just needed a touch of confidence.
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
Grate to see them have fun after all the hell. Nice work. |
Author Feedback: Gotta take time to have fun, even when the walls are falling down. |
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I love this scene, so hot and so much fun. Hehehehe
It's fun to see them older. |
Author Feedback: Isn't it though |
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hahaha that was awesome. Gotta love Harry and Hermione PDA Good stuff! |
Author Feedback: There was PDA.... Yeah, it's always fun |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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H/Hr LoveSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
Aww what an amazing story !! YOU ARE A TERRIFIC WRITER. I love the way you write.
If you have time, do you mind reading my story? You are an awesomee writer and I'd love your feedback. Thanks.
KEEP ON WRITING
--H/Hr Love
PS: for improvement, however, i suggest you make your chapters/stories a bitttt longer. Other than that, great jobb |
Author Feedback: That;s a cookie, not a chapter, not even really a short. My chapters average 5-7K in length. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/06
*VBG* Totally loved it. Absolutely the best thing. I loved it when Hermione got a pick up line used on her. *G* Keep up the great work.
Lisa |
Author Feedback: I actually searched the net looking for pickup lines...you know there is a site with ratings on how often they worked? |
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