crazyfishSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/02/07
Cute story. I think I've read it already, and I forget if I've reviewed, but, nevertheless, I like this. It's written simply, but tells the story perfectly, because it's simple that he likes her in just five kisses. Very cute. |
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Very cute, I like the progression from accident to intent. I love the end line. |
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q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/06
Loved the fourth kiss scene (and even the second).
The HBP spoil it's so subtle (only in the atmosphere) that you could really not mention it.
But it help to place the story in the right timeline.
Ciao! |
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That was marvellous. Sweet. Wonderful. I can continue listing appropriate adjectives to describe my warm thoughts on this story. Or, I can tell you simply: I loved it.
Thank you. |
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Mage_13Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/06
Oh, is is great!!
I really love it!!
Good job!! Keep it up!! |
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dolphin27Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/06
thes short story was great. I loved the way that you mad it seem like it was all a dream. this was awesome. Good job three thumbs up. not literally. I loved you story.
Love,
dolphin27 |
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Very nice and fluffy. Thanks for this unexpected bit of pumpkin pie |
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very cute!
this is well written, the plot flows awsomely, and the last sentence made me giggle.
great job! keep up the good work!
Magical Me |
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Excellent, excellent work. I loved the briefness of the first part - just the setup. Then the second kind of bit me from the side - whoa, it's a dream. Three was a surprise, both to me and (I think) to Harry. The fourth was the perfect resolution.
And the fifth just rocks!
Thanks for sharing! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/06
I loved that story. I was a little confused at the first part, but it is very greAT. Nice way of doing that chapter. Great job. |
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RichardUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
I dont know why, but I really liked this one. Its short, and sort of strangely written, but its good. Congrats. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/06
Wonderful little fic. I especially love #5 - "By the fifth, he's given up trying." Love it. Great job and keep 'em coming! ~Cat |
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Oh. Wow. This was such a good little one-shot. So very good. I always admire those who can write HHr and make it so believable. ^_^ |
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zho9Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/10/06
Just gorgeous! Great progression from the first thoughtless kiss and automatic denial to the fifth time - total surrender. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/10/06
I loved this! I thought the ending was just perfect, and I love how everything just builds up to it. Great work! |
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