is 'Krum', or whoever he really is, drinking polyjuice and giving Hermione a love potion? why else would he bring his juice with him? and, why would he lead Harry deep into the forest? why would Harry trust Krum this far and even forget he was there? Mad-Eye would have a field day with that! hopefully Harry comes to his senses.

what else would make Hermione leave Harry when he needed her most? the same thing that drew her away in year 6? i hope it starts to get a little clearer. i'm really sad when Harry and Hermione aren't together...

ok, you definitely have me confused. weren't we with Harry on his mission? what happened there? and, where did Krum come from? did someone throw Harry into an alternate universe that he doesn't know about? i mean, i know that Ginny can be shallow, but *this* shallow? it's just weird. and i've never really been able to picture Hermione and Krum together...

is it someone polyjuiced to look like Hermione to exact that last little bit of torture on Harry for killing Voldemort? i'm assuming that Voldemort is dead...right?

well, that was certainly an interesting beginning. i really can't wait to see where you go with this story! i can't imagine that Hermione would leave Harry unless she absolutely had to. It has to be connected to why Ginny stopped writing to Harry.

So you can transfer your power to your patronus? that has some cool implications. Hopefully that will give Harry the strength he needs.

cool beginning!

Awwwww . . . that's absolutely adorable! Short, admittedly, but I love it! Harry is so stunningly in canon that you just blew my socks off! Well, if I was wearing socks you would've . . .

I must say, this is one of the oddest, most amusing, most head-shakingly-brilliantly-funny stories I've read in a long time. Thanks.

Heh, that was rather interesting. The part where Krum/Hermione confessed his/her love for Harry was amusing to say the least. Brilliant to say the most. It took me a second to put two and two together and realize that Krum was really Hermione.

Well, I have to say I was enjoying it at first. A story in which Harry isn't the one at fault, and Hermione has actually done something wrong, instead of being the know-it-all, perfect girl as a lot of people portray her to be.

Until explanation. I love the twist at the end (kinda had it figured, but still nice), but Harry seemed, in my eyes, to give it far too easily.

Hermione disapparated without a word, knowing he's about to fight the final battle (alone now) and says 'oh, I returned, but it was too late, the door was sealed'. I don't know - the explanation didn't really satisfy me, personally.

Don't get me wrong, I like the fic, I just found Hermione's betrayal very little pressed upon. Can't have been so bad if Harry gave in to an 'I love you' - I also found Hermione's approach a little too assertive and overly-assuming that Harry returned her feelings.

I'm thinking from a slightly personal P.O.V too, I suppose... I mean if my best friend left without saying why as I was about to face some powerful, psychotic phreak, now completely alone, I would certainly want to have it out with her as best I could... even if she did come back - too late.

Ah well, most of that is personal, and simply relates to how I feel about Harry always being the bad-guy out of the two. I was hoping for some satisfaction - Harry screaming at Hermione, letting her know how he really left about her dessertion, no matter why she left.

Did she even apologise? Once?

Lol, sorry. I really do love the way you write, even if it was a little disjointed. But you posted all at once, good tact there, my friend. Keep it up and good luck with your future fics.

My respect to you as a fellow author.

Signed: Alex Dracius

Short, sweet, and to the point. With a very interesting twist. Great job! Keep writing!

Well, you have a real gift for description - you do that very well.

I notice that you had several reviewers criticizing you for putting this all up in one day. I'd have to say that I don't agree with them. I think if you had posted it days apart, people would not have returned to it. It was very disjointed and only made sense reading it all at once. That being said, I'd work on the "sense" of the story if I were you. Some of it was "huh?" because it didn't make sense when reading it and you had to get to later for it to flow.

Brilliant, perfect and Hermione taking Krum form to say she was sorry that just topped it . Loved that Harry did figure it out finally.

I suspected that it was some polyjuice potion in the fic when you mentioned that Krum (right person Hermione) drank an orange juice.

Of all storied this is one of the weirdest
Lockhart and Ginny, I've never imagined those two..First I thought that is was Draco. ;p

Anyway, it ended perfect,

I was going to chastise you for making Victor so much out of character, but I guess it fits into the story now. Very strange story and ending but it gets a good point across and I didn't find it boring at any time.

Writing out chapters one at a time is good if you want to try to soak up more reviews, but the way I see it, a story doesn't need that soap opera feel (the fact that you have to wait to see the conclusion to everything "next time") to be good so regardless of what people say, write it the way YOU want.

Aww what an amazing story !! YOU ARE A TERRIFIC WRITER. I love the way you write.

If you have time, do you mind reading my story? You are an awesomee writer and I'd love your feedback. Thanks.
KEEP ON WRITING

--H/Hr Love

PS: However, a word of advice: DONT POST THE WHOLE STORY IN ONE DAY. lol, you want ppl to have some more suspense. (:
other than that... GOODJOB

Interesting. However I think you shouldn't have posted the whole story in the same day...I don't know...it's kill the suspense.

And the krum/Hermione revelation was a little confused.

But it wasn't bad.

Over all: Good.

Poor flow from chapter 1 and 2. I didn't understand where and when it was taking place.

Neat how you had Harry react to Hermione-Krum when she still looked like Krum.

Good short story.