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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 09/02/08
I would not give up the day job if I were you, this is just a whole load of garbage with no sense no explanations, for instance if Hermione turned down Krum because of Harry why then would she agree to him having someone polyjuiced as her, like I say its totall rubish.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/02/08
I'm trying hard to find something other than totall rubish in this story but boy am I failing, in fact come to think about it this has yet to reach the giddy heights of rubish.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/02/08
Is this supposed to be totally confussing with no cohesion or what?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 12/09/07
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
GAWD THIS STORY IS SO DUMB
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 30/12/06
Well, I think that was brillant. Lovely job. Poor Harry..he must've been an emotional wreck. Wow...that was great. Lovely job.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 30/12/06
Whoa...ok...now this is just extremely weird. Now it's Hermione. Well, she's extremely clever. Great job. I loved this huge twist. Brilliant. Off to read more...
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 30/12/06
Oh wow. That's not good at all. Krum does love Harry. Ack..who would've thought. Lol. Well, I can't wait to understand more and more of this. Wow...talk about a mess. Whoa! Nice spin and everything.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 30/12/06
Wow...that sucked for Harry. Great details with the scenary. Wonderful job. Poor Harry...only to be listening to Krum but and then to hear that Ron was drying. I thought the letter was from Rom, asking Hermioen back, I didn't know that it was from Krum. Very interesting.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/12/06
Well that was quite interesting. I am excited to see what is going to go on between Harry and Krum. It is very reminiscent of their little talk in their fourth year about Hermione and I'm wondering if Krum isn't going to ask if anything is going on between Harry and her. Greatj ob.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/12/06
Wow...well Hermione went to Krum. I never expected Ginny to go to Lockhart. I thought it was Draco from the description of the blonde hair, but then I had to re-read it because I got confused of the Youth Elixir thingy. Great job.
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/06
Well this seems quite interesting. You start off with the battle. Ah..many writers tend to avoid this. Very interesting.
 

paxaurelia
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 20/12/06
ok. i think i get it. but, i'm still wondering why she felt that she couldn't just tell him the truth after everything that they had gone through together.

any explanation as to where the Ginny/Lockhart thing came from? that is just so random and weird...was that just in there to make the whole thing more confusing?

i wonder how Ron would react to them being together...

and, why on earth would Krum hang around and disguise a fangirl to look like Hermione?

so, even though I still have a few questions, this story was one of the most unique ones that i've ever read. good job! at least they got together in the end and that's all that really matters. :-)
 

paxaurelia
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 20/12/06
woah. i didn't think i could get more confused than i was before, but i am! if that is your intent, you are doing a wonderful job at it.

why didn't Harry realize that it was Hermione's otter that gave him his wand. he knows her patronus...

who was Krum/Hermione/whoever, talking to when she/he lit the tree on fire?

ok, no more questions...i'm just going to get to the last chapter so i can perhaps understand some of it...
 

paxaurelia
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 20/12/06
oh my. Hermione polyjuiced herself to look like Krum and that's why Krum is acting so strangely and Harry had an inclination to be with her. this is really strange. i still don't know why Hermione couldn't have told all of this to him herself, as she is. Harry would have been so much more understanding if she had actually been herself. this situation is just really weird. and, i still don't get the whole fooling around with Krum if she loves Harry.

i'm with Harry, how could Hermione forgive Krum if he lied to her like that?

and, doesn't Harry know that Hermione's patronus came to help him?

the story truly lives up to its name and if you can make it all right in the end, i will be extremely impressed.
 

paxaurelia
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 20/12/06
these chapters are really short, by the way. you get me all excited and then stop. at least i can just go on to the next one.

i still don't understand why Hermione couldn't just tell Harry that she thought Ron was dying and they could have gone back together. even if it was just to see him for a short time. and, when did Hermione get all buddy-buddy with Krum. sure, they write letters to each other, but they didn't have the relationship that she and Harry have. is this a Harry/Hermione story afterall?
 

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