Aww what an amazing story !! That was a BRILLIANT oneshot. I love the ending.... it's beauuutiful.

YOU ARE A TERRIFIC WRITER. I love the way you write.

If you have time, do you mind reading my story? You are an awesomee writer and I'd love your feedback. Thanks.
KEEP ON WRITING

--H/Hr Love

Wonderful one shot. The kind that leaves you wanting more, more, more. Tremendous writing and thoroughly enjoyable to boot.

Whoa! What can I say about this fic? BRILLIANTLY written! Had me engrossed form the start! The paragraph about the seasons was really nicely done and I love the way you haven`t explicitly stated their exact relationship eg. for whom they work. The writing flows beautifully - you can`t help but read on! The description about blushing is lovely and really quite sexy, and I can`t wat for the next chapter! Loved it!

This is really lovely! I very much like them, as they're both wonderfully in character, despite the small amount of nice-ness. Write again soon!

~ Vi Ke

That was just wonderful! All emotional turmoil and lovely imagery.

And I liked that you didn't have him apologize.

Beautiful!

that was cute. I think you did a good job of capturing the dynamics of how their personalities would work in a relationship of any sort.

Oooh, I loved it!!

It was cute, short and to the point. Very nice

I hope to see more from you when you get the time!!

Okay so, I read this like three times already, by the way. And it gets BETTER each time around. I love all the little details of it and the fic as a whole and I love YOU, missy. What are the chances of becoming such close friends with someone whose writing you'd probably fangirl over on the internets?

Anyway, I paricularly like every word, but I suppose I'll fish out some especially amazing bits.

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God, I can't even CHOOSE.