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This is a good story... Count on Hermione to discover things logically where there is no logic (for if there was a logic in love, it would be an exact science ;-) )
Anyway, I'd like to hear the conversation between her and Ron the next day... and between Harry and Ron if he was to talk to him again...
Maybe an idea for another chapter?
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filkertomUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
Oooh. Now that was rather well done. I mean, given the site, I had an inkling it might indeed end up H/Hr, but I was anticipating unrequited. Nice change-up.  |
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Oh, I liked this one shot... I should probably go to study, but it was worth putting it on hold  Poor Ron, I feel bad for him, why did she kiss him if she didn't feel that way about him? I liked the end nonetheless  |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
Great chapter. But I think Hermione would have known that he went for the horcrux from just looking at him! |
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ValancySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
I really enjoyed this!
I liked the humor ("don't call me Shirley" and "say something, 'something'")!
The romance was sweet and tasteful at the end.
This was very well written overall. I like your writing style. |
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mrrlyn42Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
not bad... I cant think of the words to desc my thoughts though.... Ron will take this badly... and they might almost be outcast from alot of thier friends.... |
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Oh! I liked that. Lol.
Bad timing, indeed! Poor Harry. Couldn't he have at least...cleaned up a bit? Looking all pitiful after his conquest of the Horcrux. Poor boy. Boys are just so daft when it comes to these things, aren't they?
I liked it! I liked it!
Very cute and slightly angsty from the beginning but I like how Hermione was very persistent. Good dependable Hermione - always sets out to get to the bottom of things. *huzzah*
*snicker*
write more!
melissa
acoustics1220
*if this is a one-shot, make sure to change the status to complete ^_^ |
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Oh so very beautiful! That's amazing!
Loved the fact that Hermione felt the sameway aas he did... Just the way she told him. Love it.
Great job! Keep it up. |
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TovaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
omg I loved it!!
`Don't change the subject - hang on, what do you mean “you went for a Horcrux?” Surely you didn't go on your own?'
`I did…I and don't call me Shirley.'
I laughed when I read that
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TovaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
omg I loved it!!
`Don't change the subject - hang on, what do you mean “you went for a Horcrux?” Surely you didn't go on your own?'
`I did…I and don't call me Shirley.'
I laughed when I read that
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h/hr4everSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
ah very very cute. i loved it - you are really good in both one-shots and long stories. hope you keep writing
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/10/06
now.this is nice. i felt so engrossed in their conversation, as if im in it myself.could imagine their tone any everything. Now i really wish you post this one in chunks. |
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It is kind of sad, for Ron, you know. Not that I'm really worried, but... It is unfair.
And Hermione is the always logical Hermione we know and adore.
Good job.
Sakura_txell |
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