love it! Your dialogue is spot on, I love 'You Harry, it's always been you'. Well duh Harry.
Really like your writing. My one observation on this story is that I don't think Hermione would just ditch Ron and go straight to Harry I think she'd ditch him first then lay low for a bit, & let him cool off before hooking up with Harry. And at least her and Harry would have the cloak...
Thanks, I enjoy your stories

"My, you are dim" haha...probably my favorite quote from this fanfic. it just seems likes something hermione would say to harry during a moment like this. great job!

While I do like that they are together, I don't like what they did to Ron, but to each their own.

Excellent oneshot. I enjoyed it - seemed pretty realistic. Thanks for not dragging it out into serious angst.

Aww, How cute! LOL, When Hermione said that neither of them would be alone, I was so hoping she would have said that Ron confessed that he was dating Luna and couldn't date Hermione.

Very good. You need to get an 'ell of a lot more stories out. I only wish i was as great a writer as you. Everything flows together great and its just great. Keep up the good work.
Sin cera, Jake N. E.

fanastic story, couldn't you have made it a bit longer. I would have liked to see Ron's reaction as well.

A very sweet one-shot, you actually got me disliking Hermione there as well, poor Harry Still, glad to see things worked out alright.

Great job!

That was a very cute little one shot. Keep up the good work.

I've already read quite a few fics that bear a striking resemblance to this one and, suprisingly, I enjoyed it every bit as much as I did the first time I read one like it. To me, stories like this always nail what I think Hermione's character would act like if a situation like this were to happen.

Keep writing!

Although the witty comments bandied back and forth between Harry and Hermione were fun to read. The whole story felt stilted. I didn't get a lot of emotion from the conversation. And the end came way too soon. I don't think that you should expand this type of fiction any longer than one chapter. But, a well rounded one-shot is easier to read. The beginning had quite a bit of promise. But the rest of was a let down. My only piece of advice I can give without going through line by line for you is . . . . slow down, enjoy the ride, show don't tell of the emotion.

Thanks for the read though.

Ok, so I'm cruising the updated fics page, right? And I see this 100000+ worded fic....that only had been online for a day. So, I obviously had to click on it. Then I noticed a one-shot by the same author....so, like, I clicked that one too.

I thought this was really, really, really cute, although I don't think it'll happen (well, to be honest, I don't think H/Hr will happen, but it's always nice to hope ) as far as the going after a horcrux without Ron or Hermione. But it was still amazing! I hope The Sixth Year Mutiny is good too!

-- Sage

Aww that was cute!! I liked that, i mean i feel a little bad for ron, just a little, but still i like that. Its nice that they didn't sacrifice themselves for ron's feelings. Good story, well written.

Welcome at Portkey, "Dai Llewellyn"; I hope you find as many like-minded reviewers here as you hoped. PS: Can you tell I'm a fan of yours from ff dot net? I'm a lurker by nature but I just *had* *to* greet you ...

This is a good story... Count on Hermione to discover things logically where there is no logic (for if there was a logic in love, it would be an exact science ;-) )
Anyway, I'd like to hear the conversation between her and Ron the next day... and between Harry and Ron if he was to talk to him again...

Maybe an idea for another chapter?

Rufus